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ThreeMilks875
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2020-08-15 15:42

It’s a good book, but the grammar puts me off a bit. The MC is a Gary sue (super handsome, genius, fighting expert) and is contradictory so that’s kinda bad. I still like it, and would continue to read it if it got proofread.

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Cruchymonster
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Thank you for trying out the book

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