Review Detail of Chloe_Roissere in Song Of The Raptor

Thus review doesn't really count, but I re read my chapters three times. I honestly think I was being to harsh on myself. Though yes, I will do better on my backgrounds. I swear it. The character of Aya is in many ways a tragic figure. However, as she learns and grows to know part of the world, she too begins to change as the story progresses. The Elder, or Mako, is interesting in as much as he has known Aya the longest, and his longevity is high despite the world around him and his blindness. He loves one and all, and never stops trying to do the right thing for all concerned. I could go on and on, but it would be foolish and redundant. I just hope that anyone that reads this, at least finds some enjoyment.