Review Detail of YangLun in Merging Xianxia Universes

For a not so popular story, this one has some great writing qualities and interesting elements. And for those who are wondering this isn't a two MC story, the female cousin is only a side character. Furthermore, the Original MCs haven't appeared at all in the story. Though this story isn't perfect, there are things that are worthy of praise. Positives: Like I mentioned before the writing quality for this story is surprisingly great and generally chapters, sometimes, flow really well. The cheat like powers the MC has as well is interesting but it doesn't make him too Op. For the world, it's a unique concept of combining three novels together and so far we'll still exploring the beginning areas of this universe. The characters of the original novels are generally the same, though some side characters get some changes. The MC has a fun enough to read personality. And for the heroines, their relationships get expanded on an enjoyable way to read. Even when the MC gets together quite quickly, they at least take the time to get to know each other and feel each other out. Though there is a reason why they get together so quickly. Negatives: Especially prevalent in the beginning parts of the story are long parts where the MC shows of his prowess to prove a point. It's not terrible but these scenes could be cut down majorly or the MC could find other ways to prove his point. Things tend to be slower in the early chapters, and while I understand it's for world-building and character building, the story could often long-winded during these times. At least now the plot seems to be picking up the pace. The power system and cultivation as well need to explain more thoroughly so readers can have a sense of what going on and not be confused since the story already puts out a lot of realms. All in all, I would say this fanfic is definitely worth checking it and it has the potential to be something great.