Review Detail of Lord_Eternity in Merging Xianxia Universes
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Well its well written compared to standard quality on this website. It will require atleast 100 chaps for more accurate review Starting choice and progression is good. Choice of heroines is also ok. Mc has good cheats and quick progression is appreciated. No long separation is also a good part(will see if it holds true in future) Now here are thigs I dislike People seem out of character compared to original novel. Mc conviniently forgets storyline and details. Mc and his team try act cool but it seems immature at times. The times they 'reveal' their powers and hidden talents aree too much!! They go showing off one by one covering most of the chapter with someting that lost it appeal after few times. It seems quite boring and childish so I feel the need to skim that section.
Merging Xianxia Universes
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The MC and his team don't try to act cool, literally the only times they reveal their powers is to gain an advantage in their lives because that's how their world works. The MC barely even interacts with others outside of his team. There was only one incident he purposely shows off to a large crowd but that was for a different reason.
In xianxia world showing off that you can jump 2 realms will make many people with intention intreasted in them. This intreast and jealousy can make life troublesome. Thats how those world worked. Thing is if it was a whole original work, it maybe acceptable. But personality changes for convenience and people disregarding rules and other things just because of a convenient curse is offputting. Well its still ok but repeatedly reading thier powerup one by one in difference of just some 5-6 chaps is not my prefernce to read. The whole process doesnot need to be described all times. Some simple sentences will do
CosmicPrime:The MC and his team don't try to act cool, literally the only times they reveal their powers is to gain an advantage in their lives because that's how their world works. The MC barely even interacts with others outside of his team. There was only one incident he purposely shows off to a large crowd but that was for a different reason.
In xianxia world showing off that you can jump 2 realms will make many people with intention intreasted in them. This intreast and jealousy can make life troublesome. Thats how those world worked. Thing is if it was a whole original work, it maybe acceptable. But personality changes for convenience and people disregarding rules and other things just because of a convenient curse is offputting. Well its still ok but repeatedly reading thier powerup one by one in difference of just some 5-6 chaps is not my prefernce to read. The whole process doesnot need to be described all times. Some simple sentences will do
CosmicPrime:The MC and his team don't try to act cool, literally the only times they reveal their powers is to gain an advantage in their lives because that's how their world works. The MC barely even interacts with others outside of his team. There was only one incident he purposely shows off to a large crowd but that was for a different reason.
In xianxia world showing off that you can jump 2 realms will make many people with intention intreasted in them. This intreast and jealousy can make life troublesome. Thats how those world worked. Thing is if it was a whole original work, it maybe acceptable. But personality changes for convenience and people disregarding rules and other things just because of a convenient curse is offputting. Well its still ok but repeatedly reading thier powerup one by one in difference of just some 5-6 chaps is not my prefernce to read. The whole process doesnot need to be described all times. Some simple sentences will do
CosmicPrime:The MC and his team don't try to act cool, literally the only times they reveal their powers is to gain an advantage in their lives because that's how their world works. The MC barely even interacts with others outside of his team. There was only one incident he purposely shows off to a large crowd but that was for a different reason.
Well even at the start of the story there were told this universe would be very different from their originals counterparts, but I do understand the complaints and will marginally shorten scenes like this when it happens.
Lord_Eternity:In xianxia world showing off that you can jump 2 realms will make many people with intention intreasted in them. This intreast and jealousy can make life troublesome. Thats how those world worked. Thing is if it was a whole original work, it maybe acceptable. But personality changes for convenience and people disregarding rules and other things just because of a convenient curse is offputting. Well its still ok but repeatedly reading thier powerup one by one in difference of just some 5-6 chaps is not my prefernce to read. The whole process doesnot need to be described all times. Some simple sentences will do
Lord_Eternity:In xianxia world showing off that you can jump 2 realms will make many people with intention intreasted in them. This intreast and jealousy can make life troublesome. Thats how those world worked. Thing is if it was a whole original work, it maybe acceptable. But personality changes for convenience and people disregarding rules and other things just because of a convenient curse is offputting. Well its still ok but repeatedly reading thier powerup one by one in difference of just some 5-6 chaps is not my prefernce to read. The whole process doesnot need to be described all times. Some simple sentences will do
