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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv123yr
2021-08-14 05:15

I love this fanfic!!! Unfortunately the release schedule is very slow. Posting on fanfictionnet might be a good idea, webnovel is not very suitable for slow release novels like this. It's a very good fanfic, but the beginning is its weak point. Before mc starts sailing the seas the story is kind of bad, sometimes characters like luffy and garp don't seem right which makes sense as we haven't had much screen time in the nime/manga with kid luffy so it's normal to look weird. However as soon as the mc starts her adventure, the story goes off and becomes amazing!!! Honestly, if it weren't for the bad beginnings and the fact that female mc is simply not that popular, fanfic would definitely attract a lot of readers. My advice to the author is to rewrite the first chapters and upload the fanfic again completely to enter the monthly rankings, maybe an increase in popularity is what the author needs to motivate himself to write more. It's kind of sad to see such a good fanfic with only 3 or 4 chapters per month.

To be the strongest

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CodezL
CodezLLv4

It is an excellent story, the only thing that would make it better is instead of her having an affair with a man, do it with a woman, yuri would improve the story.

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Filina
FilinaLv13

Such a great book. Don't drop it and continue like this.

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yourgramps
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Only the intro has me hooked already u a hero 4 thinking about such a scenario....really original can't wait to read it fully but accept my 5star review anyway xd!!! I am in here for a good time not a long time(drake) (but please stay for a long time) ** just bull****ting the last bit for extra words

4yr
Daoistlamine
DaoistlamineLv4

Great job author Please can we now if it is a Yuri or well …

1yr
Froststar624
Froststar624Lv4

Reveal spoiler

3yr
GeneralLuficer
GeneralLuficerLv12

Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii! Akane is Kawaii!

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Yoru_
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Not Yuri, YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

4yr
smyp
smypLv11

Reveal spoiler

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Edgelord69
Edgelord69Lv4

It is a good idea to hold the story for 2 years and then resume it, because in those 2 years one piece story was advancing so fast that can help you gain more insight to write. overall good 5 stars

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