Review Detail of Laplaces_dream in Annihilation Maker DXD
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I had rated this book 5 stars before, but now I have to give it a 1 star. . . At the beginning of the story, everything was AWESOME!!! There were very few Fanfics that could actually be better than this... But for the last FEW MONTHS, every single chapter has been about the adventures of the side characters... There has been no MC, no Annihilation Maker, and of course not a single bit of DxD... Infact the DxD of this story might even be an AU, with a female protagonist instead of Issei... . Now I saw many reviews defending the book saying that the entire last arc has been given to us to explain the mechanics of the multiverse, so it is our fault that we don't like it. You know what? I am not reading Fanfics on Webnovel about DxD to learn about how the multiverse works! I want actual stories, actual Fanfic, not an entirely AU DxD, or an entirely AU Fate universe, or an entirely AU Konosuba!!! BTW, warning: Every single world that is in this Fanfic is an AU, with hundreds of other reincarnators, no resemblence of the actual plot or the characters... . Now it is not that I don't like a little bit of exposition about the multiverse... But that's it, just a LITTLE BIT, not an entire arc stretching 30+ chapters and more than three months... I like stories with other reincarnators and the MC has to kill them or win against them, but that was not the actual topic here! This Fanfic was supposed to be about DxD and Annihilation Maker, but we haven't even got a smidgen of DxD... The author is trying every single genre out there that many people read and trying to mix them all together to create this huge unrecognisable mess. Where there is almost every famous genre in the Fanfic section but not a single one is in the appropriate amount. This story includes DxD, but only for a few chapters then we never talk about the main cast ever again. There is Annihilation Maker but half of the story is not even about that, this story is about the MC who is actually Lucifer Morningstar. So after the first arc we almost never see the use of Annihilation Maker ever again. There is a Chat Group, which I will admit has been done quite well, but if the MC is not even there for such a significant chunk of the story, it doesn't become enjoyable anymore. There are other reincarnators that the MC's group needs to kill, but I didn't come here to read about other reincarnators! I need Annihilation Maker and I need DxD! Give it to me!
Annihilation Maker DXD
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You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
Quem_Matou_Owen:You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
you gave this book 1 star just because of konosuba ark??? I mean even if it's boring to some extent it has some good things such as character development, I guess some people get unsatisfied no matter what, if the character development is focused on mc they have a problem, if it is focused on everyone then that's a problem, if it's focused on side characters then again that's a problem. I mean i get your pain but this fanfic doesn't deserve a 1 star for this.
Quem_Matou_Owen:You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
this is the most brave comments i have read in this fic. you deserve medal my man. i decide to not read this because i agree with you, i'm here for dxd fandom and how mc navigate it. i don't want to read a story of jumble mess multiverse crossover fandom or fic which plague by many OCs who takes canon character roles and screentime. good review mate
Quem_Matou_Owen:You are very impatient and your criticism is no longer grounded in the current part of the story. It would make sense on Konosuba's part, but his criticism is unfounded so far. Another thing, the moment it became fanfic it was obvious that progress in the world was going to change. I won't talk about all your complaints, some even make sense and I even understand your impatience, but 1 star for a fanfic of this pure heresy, sorry but your head is full of garbage. [Google translator]
Discarded:this is the most brave comments i have read in this fic. you deserve medal my man. i decide to not read this because i agree with you, i'm here for dxd fandom and how mc navigate it. i don't want to read a story of jumble mess multiverse crossover fandom or fic which plague by many OCs who takes canon character roles and screentime. good review mate
