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Legendary_Person
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This novel lacks a profound review so here am I, to present you with a detailed one. Our Mc is reincarnated into DxD with a non-sentinel system and a chat-group in his phone through which he can contact other anime characters. Mc's personality tends towards rationality, he isn't polite to others and usually acts indifferent towards them. He cares about his mother, sister and father. He is friends with Saji who isn't a devil yet. An enemy is an enemy for our Mc, doesn't matter if the enemy is a woman or man. As the title suggests, Mc possesses Longinus 'Annihilate Maker' who gives the user the ability to create monsters of any kind using imagination, information and energy as a base for creation. Currently, other than creating a spider who can hide him from the supernatural, a blue butterfly which creates illusions, he is in the process of creating a monster who can manipulate senjutsu. He wants to avoid interacting with other supernaturals until he gains enough strength as he will be dragged into the plot no matter what. Currently, his direct combat capabilities are unknown also he doesn't like Red Dragon Boob emperor. This is the summary of what is going on in the novel. Now what does this story has to offer are as follows. 1. Updates:- One per day 2. Background:-Good but there isn't much in-depth details or visuals though Mc is described as of how he looks. 3. Character design:-8/10 A bit naive, he needs to mature a bit as his opponents are going to use whatever they can against him. Basically, he needs to be creative and hide his steps from others. Cover up his tracks and try not to use his powers within the school building where he is basically within potential enemy territory. You can't just put a teacher under illusion within the enemy territory where other supernaturals can actually be monitoring you. 4. Imagination and writing quality:-8/10 Extremely creative author as he is able to come up with some truly interesting ideas for the ability. Also, the writing quality is good, nothing out of ordinary but makes the story enjoyable. My personal thoughts on the novel:- Very good DXD fanfic as there is basically no good DXD fanfictions out there. I would like the novel more if Mc can act more secretly, especially when his friend is going to be a part of a potential danger to him (Sona). Plz do not engage with Rias and be creative...... Overall this fanfic is truly worth reading, I hope it isn't dropped..... Stay safe and stay inside...... ~Diseda

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Daoist_GWillz
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PandaSempai
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Mm, thank you for giving this review. I got the info I needed. Majority of the people who gives a review just says, "Good novel! More chapters please!" and end it there. Kudos to you.

Legendary_Person
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No problem.....

PandaSempai:Mm, thank you for giving this review. I got the info I needed. Majority of the people who gives a review just says, "Good novel! More chapters please!" and end it there. Kudos to you.
kevin_saputra
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thanks

Pimple_Face_13
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Oh, I’m one of those who does that. Not really good with constructive feedback or how to do good reviews so I only do one to really good ones and when there should be more reviews since they’re great.

PandaSempai:Mm, thank you for giving this review. I got the info I needed. Majority of the people who gives a review just says, "Good novel! More chapters please!" and end it there. Kudos to you.
1Dreamer_Owl
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Thanks

PandaSempai
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Hahaha. Well, only a minority gives constructive criticisms here, anyway.

Pimple_Face_13:Oh, I’m one of those who does that. Not really good with constructive feedback or how to do good reviews so I only do one to really good ones and when there should be more reviews since they’re great.
Kiritodragonslayer
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THANKS UNKNOWN HERO

NonReal
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I have to disagree on that no good fanfics. While indeed I haven't found anything all that interesting here, there are a few gems on fanfiction.net

ipanchu
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Thank you.

Aldunhokoron
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My good sir, thank you for your profound review as it greatly helped me decide to read this or not.

Legendary_Person
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No problem.

Aldunhokoron:My good sir, thank you for your profound review as it greatly helped me decide to read this or not.
Legendary_Person
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No problem.

Aldunhokoron:My good sir, thank you for your profound review as it greatly helped me decide to read this or not.
ZEUS666
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Abandoned gems

NonReal:I have to disagree on that no good fanfics. While indeed I haven't found anything all that interesting here, there are a few gems on fanfiction.net
Shadewind
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I don't really understand the hate on rias. Come on like you guys would be better if you are in her shoes. Don't even fight look at the real world rich kids how they turned to be. And in a fanfic you can change her spoiled manners . You guys are getting on my nerves . She is way better than some anime girls . Even sakura ( naruto) didn't got that amount of hate . Like please just logically think why do you guys hate her and judge it what will you do if you are in her shoes . If you say that you will start training hard at young age don't bs with me you hypocrites like which one of you even star studying seriously at young age . Do you like studying.....? For her training is the same as studying . And if you have rich heritage , authority and a very powerful brother who would wanna training anyway as she has a long life (10000 years ) . You hate her for her spoiled manner don't make me laugh.....then why are you wasting your life reading some fantasy books go on study hard as if you don't you will be a little b*itch like rias . As she also don't wanna work hard she just wanna have fun like us and also did you take her age in consideration she's just a teenager which is the age we wanna have all the fun we wanna have . So if you wanna hate her and wanna argue with myself give a logical thing to why you wanna hate her don't be hypocrite and little bi*tch.

Legendary_Person
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I didn't hate on her, j just said not to interact with her.....same goes to Sona. There are many novels which entertain the same plot over and over again. This I suggested the author try something new. There isn't a single hate word against Rias. Grow up and think maturely before ranting bull**** here and there. People who hate Rias for taking things for granted aren't little ***** rather people like you who choose to ignore the weaknesses of a character are ignorant bitches....

Shadewind:I don't really understand the hate on rias. Come on like you guys would be better if you are in her shoes. Don't even fight look at the real world rich kids how they turned to be. And in a fanfic you can change her spoiled manners . You guys are getting on my nerves . She is way better than some anime girls . Even sakura ( naruto) didn't got that amount of hate . Like please just logically think why do you guys hate her and judge it what will you do if you are in her shoes . If you say that you will start training hard at young age don't bs with me you hypocrites like which one of you even star studying seriously at young age . Do you like studying.....? For her training is the same as studying . And if you have rich heritage , authority and a very powerful brother who would wanna training anyway as she has a long life (10000 years ) . You hate her for her spoiled manner don't make me laugh.....then why are you wasting your life reading some fantasy books go on study hard as if you don't you will be a little b*itch like rias . As she also don't wanna work hard she just wanna have fun like us and also did you take her age in consideration she's just a teenager which is the age we wanna have all the fun we wanna have . So if you wanna hate her and wanna argue with myself give a logical thing to why you wanna hate her don't be hypocrite and little bi*tch.
Legendary_Person
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I didn't hate on her, j just said not to interact with her.....same goes to Sona. There are many novels which entertain the same plot over and over again. This I suggested the author try something new. There isn't a single hate word against Rias. Grow up and think maturely before ranting bull**** here and there. People who hate Rias for taking things for granted aren't little ***** rather people like you who choose to ignore the weaknesses of a character are ignorant bitches....

Shadewind:I don't really understand the hate on rias. Come on like you guys would be better if you are in her shoes. Don't even fight look at the real world rich kids how they turned to be. And in a fanfic you can change her spoiled manners . You guys are getting on my nerves . She is way better than some anime girls . Even sakura ( naruto) didn't got that amount of hate . Like please just logically think why do you guys hate her and judge it what will you do if you are in her shoes . If you say that you will start training hard at young age don't bs with me you hypocrites like which one of you even star studying seriously at young age . Do you like studying.....? For her training is the same as studying . And if you have rich heritage , authority and a very powerful brother who would wanna training anyway as she has a long life (10000 years ) . You hate her for her spoiled manner don't make me laugh.....then why are you wasting your life reading some fantasy books go on study hard as if you don't you will be a little b*itch like rias . As she also don't wanna work hard she just wanna have fun like us and also did you take her age in consideration she's just a teenager which is the age we wanna have all the fun we wanna have . So if you wanna hate her and wanna argue with myself give a logical thing to why you wanna hate her don't be hypocrite and little bi*tch.
Legendary_Person
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I didn't hate on her, j just said not to interact with her.....same goes to Sona. There are many novels which entertain the same plot over and over again. This I suggested the author try something new. There isn't a single hate word against Rias. Grow up and think maturely before ranting bull**** here and there. People who hate Rias for taking things for granted aren't little ***** rather people like you who choose to ignore the weaknesses of a character are ignorant bitches....

Shadewind:I don't really understand the hate on rias. Come on like you guys would be better if you are in her shoes. Don't even fight look at the real world rich kids how they turned to be. And in a fanfic you can change her spoiled manners . You guys are getting on my nerves . She is way better than some anime girls . Even sakura ( naruto) didn't got that amount of hate . Like please just logically think why do you guys hate her and judge it what will you do if you are in her shoes . If you say that you will start training hard at young age don't bs with me you hypocrites like which one of you even star studying seriously at young age . Do you like studying.....? For her training is the same as studying . And if you have rich heritage , authority and a very powerful brother who would wanna training anyway as she has a long life (10000 years ) . You hate her for her spoiled manner don't make me laugh.....then why are you wasting your life reading some fantasy books go on study hard as if you don't you will be a little b*itch like rias . As she also don't wanna work hard she just wanna have fun like us and also did you take her age in consideration she's just a teenager which is the age we wanna have all the fun we wanna have . So if you wanna hate her and wanna argue with myself give a logical thing to why you wanna hate her don't be hypocrite and little bi*tch.
Shadewind
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Lol weakness of a character you sound like you are perfect human being that have no weaknesses at all . Look dude I am not ranting I have seen too many people who hate hate her give some nonsensical reason like come on if you wanna a hate a character at least give some good reason . Some fanfic made her bad and you all wanna hate her that's absolutely low . And did you even understand my comment if not you won't call me immature . And if you don't want mc to do anything with rias that's because you dislike her . Well it's your own thing I have no thing to say about that i just wanna know the logical reasons why hate rias that's all there is to it . And why even bother choosing dxd world if there is no interactions between mc and the devil's . Interactions doesn't mean that they have to be in the harem .

Legendary_Person:I didn't hate on her, j just said not to interact with her.....same goes to Sona. There are many novels which entertain the same plot over and over again. This I suggested the author try something new. There isn't a single hate word against Rias. Grow up and think maturely before ranting bull**** here and there. People who hate Rias for taking things for granted aren't little ***** rather people like you who choose to ignore the weaknesses of a character are ignorant bitches....
Stand_TheWorld777
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I agree with your review, I also really hate it because Rias-gremory is spoiled and doesn't improve. but however a person learns from his life experiences, the longer his life the more he understands from time to time, and can judge what is right and what is wrong. so one day we always learn that experiences gained through our daily lives will be self-introspection and better towards the future. remember Sora's quote from NGNL (No Game No Life) = "Because of our weaknesses, we train our eyes, ears, and thinking ability. Learning how to survive is our nature as humans! The human species cannot use magic and cannot even see it - but because we are weak, we have the wisdom to escape from magic and intelligence to see it. We have no extraordinary senses. But because we are weak, by learning and gaining experience, we gain wisdom to achieve what cannot be achieved. " <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<Ignore>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Note = Honestly, even I am introspective. (Even now I do not have dreams because from the beginning until now I have only always followed the advice of my parents who really learned and succeeded in the future. I have no desire / desire in certain fields, until now I have not found what I am want to be later.)

Shadewind:Lol weakness of a character you sound like you are perfect human being that have no weaknesses at all . Look dude I am not ranting I have seen too many people who hate hate her give some nonsensical reason like come on if you wanna a hate a character at least give some good reason . Some fanfic made her bad and you all wanna hate her that's absolutely low . And did you even understand my comment if not you won't call me immature . And if you don't want mc to do anything with rias that's because you dislike her . Well it's your own thing I have no thing to say about that i just wanna know the logical reasons why hate rias that's all there is to it . And why even bother choosing dxd world if there is no interactions between mc and the devil's . Interactions doesn't mean that they have to be in the harem .
QueenMinari
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wow, this probably the most informative and neutral review I've ever read, Nice!!