Review Detail of Suigetsu_yolo_9736 in Sugary Onyx

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Rating: 4.4

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Good story. I was a little thrown off due to the pov and the synopsis. but the story telling flowed well and it was pretty erotic. I was actually surprised it got 3 chapter reads from me.

Sugary Onyx

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There are complaints about the length of the synopsis but that'll be fixed in due time. The first 5 Chapters of the book was written at a very young age and I haven't been able to fully edit them. I hope you see some changes in the remaining chapters. Thank you!

3yr