Wow. This story really caught me by surprise. It opens with a lot of mystery and lands you questioning the effects held on the characters..

Zombie isn't human. he's dead.

God

sometimes you just gotta chuck wood.

no. im here.

yup. im here. again. you.

smut time?

starts off pretty slow. but it goes into some great world building. I definitely recommend reading it. ...................................

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Very well written story for any standard. It's like reading a shonen anime (Bleach or Naruto) in a beautifully written form. I highly advise giving it a read of the first 2 chapters.

Reminds me of bleach. Sounds cool.

Easily one of the better stories on here that I've read. it's well written and the MC is a grouchy slacker/artist. I like it. Her grandma is a lovable contrast that gets reflected on. We are teased on how the demons works. But the style of writing makes the wait bearable.

"of dread" sounds unnatural.

this run on sentence sounds weird.

what is noroi?

great plot and story. It really captures you into the story. it catches you with first a teaser and then a catchy story. afterwards it brings you into a new world. I am looking forward to new chapters.

big run on.

I thought he just got all memories of the body he is in.

when did the body switch happen?

I don't like how you are switching between 1st and 3rd person.