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Review Detail of Drakonous in Erased Existence

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An interesting twist to the Isekai genre that refreshingly avoids certain cliches and tropes. It does have a similar pattern to the newer edgy Isekai where the MC is ostracized by his classmates as a weakling before getting stronger but cleverly avoids the traps regarding this trope by actually spending time fleshing out the characters and the storyline. Bits of mystery, such as his father or the inner self of Rein who claims to be his darkness despite appearing as light, also keeps the reader entertained. My only gripe about this novel is the large amount of grammatical errors. Maybe it's cause I'm an author myself, or that I love English, but I can't keep reading the novel without pausing to correct grammatical errors (sincere apologies author, I left so many corrections as paragraph sentences) and I choose to reflect this in my review score. As an author myself, the best proof reader is Grammarly, an app and program that can detect grammar errors and suggest corrections and I would highly recommend the author to use it.

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Erased Existence

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Thank you Drakonous you are such a great help ^_^ You point out the best errors... Thank you ^_^