Review Detail of Castaway_Castout in Erased Existence

Okay so, lemme give an honest review. Let's get to the good sides first. The synopsis itself was wayyyy interesting and it indeed got everybody's attention. The starting chapters are real heavy that you could literally feel the presence of the characters' emotions there as I read it. The word choice is great and I can imagine the events and enjoy the reading experience. And as what the others said, this is not a typical fantasy story one can read. Although I just noticed some flaws in terms of grammar (but it's okay we improve by practicing a lot and I also have grammar issues as well), proper punctuation, sentence structures and capitalization (if you're using a mobile phone while writing a novel, it's highly understandable because you know, those auto-correct and auto caps stuff). I suggest you use thesaurus to at least expand your vocabulary as well, legit it helps me a lot and I hope it will help you too. All in all, I find it really interesting to read and I hope to see more of your works. Don't give up on writing, just keep on expressing yourself! I highly suggest you read others' works as well because it'll be a big contribution to your writing journey. Congrats on your book, and good luck!