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AyushKumar199855
AyushKumar199855Lv144yr
2020-07-02 02:47

Nice chapter I just wish they were a little bit longer but dam the story is good. I like the take on the characters and how the MC deals with them. I wish all the best to the author for this story.

YGGDRASIL IN DC

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CalvinTheLeecher
CalvinTheLeecherLv6

First of all, this is not a Yggdrasil gamer fic, he just took the character template without investigating how it works so he might as well be a fanfic gamer, the job and the race went pretentious instead of taking something that is related to the game. The MC has lived 2 lives and has started his third and behaves worse than a person who has barely lived one, with that behavior no one swallows the one who has founded a successful company in the super cruel world of Ainz. I recommend you read the first part of the Chaotic Good fic, there is what I call a Yggdrasil player and not a Gamer fic with skin

4yr

demonm
demonmLv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr
LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv13

Trash Trash Trash Beta mc thinks with his dick be warned do no read 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

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Justin_T
Justin_TLv14

Interesting concept but the mixture of horrible grammar and lack of intelligence from a man who lived three separate lives is upsetting. Always remember authors never try to write a character that’s smarter than you. Also ignore the complaints about the wrong levels with the system he cheated that’s the point.

4yr
DragonslayerKnight
DragonslayerKnightLv4

Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash... Don't waste your time here the author doesn't know the what he's writing about... just saw an anime now he's a writer lol

4yr
Guppy7
Guppy7Lv4

The writer doesn’t have the knowledge about overlord to make a actual good fic for overlord readers. He has just used the template and not even correctly. The mc would be so much better if he acted old like he’s meant to be, not only does he have a dead wife who he was living happily with two years ago but has kids and grandkids yet still asks wonder women out on a date

4yr
TRex
TRexAuthor

Shameless author posting his own review here don't mind me continue to enjoy the story 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😗😀😀😀😀

4yr
Syahrul_Azhar
Syahrul_AzharLv4

Nice work actually, i have seen a lot of people complaining about mc childish personality, havent you heard the saying that said older(60+) you are more childish you become, And that has been proven scientifically through surveys And that my friends maybe you will understand about mc childish behavior

4yr
FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6

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4yr
LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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