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LazyOtaku33
LazyOtaku33Lv43yr
2021-05-17 03:29

The story was quite interesting and a great approach to the normal trope of the MC going to where he wanted to do what he wanting to do. liked the idea of him challenging the Greek Gods for an experiment really overlord like LOL! [img=update]

YGGDRASIL IN DC

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CalvinTheLeecher
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First of all, this is not a Yggdrasil gamer fic, he just took the character template without investigating how it works so he might as well be a fanfic gamer, the job and the race went pretentious instead of taking something that is related to the game. The MC has lived 2 lives and has started his third and behaves worse than a person who has barely lived one, with that behavior no one swallows the one who has founded a successful company in the super cruel world of Ainz. I recommend you read the first part of the Chaotic Good fic, there is what I call a Yggdrasil player and not a Gamer fic with skin

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Reveal spoiler

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LaurentCross
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Justin_T
Justin_TLv14

Interesting concept but the mixture of horrible grammar and lack of intelligence from a man who lived three separate lives is upsetting. Always remember authors never try to write a character that鈥檚 smarter than you. Also ignore the complaints about the wrong levels with the system he cheated that鈥檚 the point.

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DragonslayerKnight
DragonslayerKnightLv4

Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash Trash... Don't waste your time here the author doesn't know the what he's writing about... just saw an anime now he's a writer lol

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Guppy7
Guppy7Lv4

The writer doesn鈥檛 have the knowledge about overlord to make a actual good fic for overlord readers. He has just used the template and not even correctly. The mc would be so much better if he acted old like he鈥檚 meant to be, not only does he have a dead wife who he was living happily with two years ago but has kids and grandkids yet still asks wonder women out on a date

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Syahrul_Azhar
Syahrul_AzharLv4

Nice work actually, i have seen a lot of people complaining about mc childish personality, havent you heard the saying that said older(60+) you are more childish you become, And that has been proven scientifically through surveys And that my friends maybe you will understand about mc childish behavior

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