Review Detail of miu_hozuki in The Allure of Other Worlds (Old Version)

First of all, you need to know this story is written in play style writing, with asterisks instead of double quotes. Other than that, every thing is neatly summarized in chapter 1. The story is interesting and I can see load of potential. However, the update is really lacking as it's taking forever for a chapter to be updated. Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.