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2020-06-17 11:43

I hate Yaoi. I cannot emphasis that enough. But I will always provide a fair review. I have read up to 2 chapters, and the story premise is there and it’s solid. But if there is yaoi, please place a tag that writes yaoi on your novel. I will not read anymore of this as it is not my cup of tea, but I’m sure others would enjoy this much more than me. Keep it up, and do t forget to put a yaoi tag on there.

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