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Bohemia
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2022-03-27 01:56

This is not your usual ML or even FL. The story is dark and oftentimes disturbing but absolutely enthralling. I really liked how believable the narrative is and it definitely doesn't romanticise being the love interest of a mafiano as lots of other stories do. Well done author for creating this piece. I only wish the writing was better because there were way too many spelling errors or even whole sentences just didn't make sense and I was confused. The book needs heavy editing, otherwise it's a fantastic read.

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The best DARK ROMANCE book I read so far! The story is fast-paced .you will know within the first chapter. It feels cliche but it defo isn't. The Authors note is EVERYTHING I started to read because of it more than the synopsis, .As she doesn't promise a cliche story and putting up with abuse.. especially FL reflects the promise of the note(don't want to spoil much). Characters Alexis- She is intelligent and accepts the circumstances she is in and once recognizes the power she eventually learns to use it to her advantage some cool 'power plays' . Don't expect FL to forgive everything in a heartbeat and gives excuses for abuse and put up with it. Yes, there is attraction and she accepts and enjoys it as is pinned down with no way out anyways. You can see her thoughts are never of love and she isn't ok with his behaviour and bad blood between them. Our girl considers big bad mafioso as her 'plaything'!😏 Angelo- First 3 chapters his intention is clear. He is a mafia head he is not one who changes overnight and is all soft with FL nor are his methods to win her. There is more realistic character development with both characters. The story is focused more on the main leads and their journey in a relationship and how they are adapting. There are other characters, not much is shared about them apart from necessary info for building on main characters. Maybe because this is a short novel but the main characters make up for it but hopefully the sequel will cover it! Writing style -It's very engaging and dynamic also the story isn't stretched. As promised it has surprising elements from both characters and their past. Keeps you intrigued by a secret only some characters know. Some dark tactics you totally don't expect from both leads..you won't know what hit you like yellow fellow 👇 Author Inara - I appreciate that she can be sporty and take critical feedback and she addresses the reader's comments and complaints. Also open to readers' opinions and suggestions isn't as pushy with rank/votes but it should totally have a much higher rank! ♥️ I completely enjoyed it, definitely recommend it! Totally worth every coin spent

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