Item: Re:Start In Pokemon
Rating: 2.2
Author: kingkushal

kingkushalLv54yr

2020-06-25 07:33

Except the updating speed its very bad.... The mc does not even need to try he gets all the legendary... Although he has to train them bit no he lets them train on their own... Their is no "bond" between the pokemon and the trainer (except the legendarys) he just catches them and then wins a gym battle..... The system basically gives the mc everything.... Their is no character development.. We dont talk about mc's parents except the 1st chapter....instead professor oak takes him to his presentation not his parents no they r not even mentioned....... Basically this is a giys sandbox fantasy with poor character and world development

Re:Start In Pokemon

PratikG

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92 Chs

Liked by 12 people

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AeternabilisLv14

Agree with everything 100%. Adding onto this it's like the mc is a robot. There's no emotion everything is just to the point.

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newthingsLv6

i dont see author's comment here, guess he didnt give a **** and refused to improve

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ExaltedCrowLv13

Dude no one wants to read about some parents who aren’t really his parents anyway.

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LizrockLv4

H h hjj

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