That was very interesting if I have to say. The plot and the first two chapters got me hooked up. Can't wait to read more. The story development was well in pace and the world background was also well described. As for grammar, I can't really comment on it, coz I really don't know many rules of grammar. I think I should thank my cousin(minho) to ask me leave a review for such wonderful book. I will sure follow your work from this minute. Keep up the good work author and I will sure recommend it to my friends.
Mirilidan
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