Yay!!! I noticed some error here and there but a bit of Grammarly is the answer to that✌✌✌. Story is a bit slow at the start but picked up It's pace later on, don't worry future readers, It's just the start. There's still not much development at the start but like I said, It picked up It's pace👌👌👌. World Background was something like Sci-Fi, Comedic Space Rangers, hahaha, no, just joking. All in all, this is a nice you'v got here, keep up the good work
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