Review Detail of tuba_san in An Unfortunate Nobody's (Forced) Adventure

The multiverse jumping plot combined with a no nonsense MC, who constantly breaks the fourth wall and interacts with the author: is a combo I haven't seen on Webnovel before. Very unique. The MCs background and personality is all original, so it has been explained in the novel but the universes he travels to aren't explained. So to truly enjoy this novel a reader should have background information on this content. The only suggestion I have for the author is that keep the MCs dialogues, thoughts and the narration as three different things. For the first chapter the MC is just giving background information so it doesn't matter as much. But in the later chapters there are dialogues between the MC and author, or the MC thinks something that breaks the fourth wall. At the same time the narrative is in first person so the MC is mentioning his own actions. All of these should be separated. The dialogues are already split up but do also separate the thoughts. This is just my suggestion though, so feel free to ignore it.