Review Detail of David_Drake in An Unfortunate Nobody's (Forced) Adventure

Good plot and story so far. The arcs are individual worlds so far and the MC seems to be on top of things. One thing I do dislike is the constant cussing of the MC. Its distracting and doesn't fit the image of a billion year old man. I do hope the MC will eventually find a way to transition through the multiverse with out having to die.