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ONyat
ONyatAuthor4yr
2020-06-12 06:05

The famous author shameless 5 star review here! I'll tell you the basics: Naruto starts off with 1 year old and he already has the capability of thinking, not clearly but could walk, talk and think properly. The entire Village hated him and basically tortured him over three entire years - Not giving him food, hitting him, cutting him and cursing him. The main reason he survived through these years was due to his Uzumaki vitality and Kurama not letting his host die. He was adopted that Kakashi and as two hurt souls, they quickly found themselves attached to each other, one trying to cure the other from their past. Kakashi let his past go and accept his present, Naruto still hates any human that is hostile to him, when he's facing someone that is hostile to him, he is devoid of any emotion, he fights with the pure intent to kill. I think that if I say anything more, it'll count as a spoiler and I wont do that, personally, I like this story a lot because it's what I would like to read, I hope that through this review, you can enjoy it. From Yours Truly, Nyatsui. NYAHAHAHAHA.

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An_Anime_Addict
An_Anime_AddictLv14

Thats ok but ehy did you repost the same story? P.S. I still haven't read more than 10 chapters in the original one and i saw the title so i came here.

Yami_01
Yami_01Lv4

I talked to the help desk and this was their reply Jorenz- 2020-06-12 22:29:40 Sorry for the wait. Our team has been in contact with the user and they are looking into the issue. There are no updates as of now though as to the status of their investigation.

Yami_01
Yami_01Lv4

You reposted again or your old Naruto is now accepting power stones

SiegFredSkill
SiegFredSkillLv5

Is this bl

ONyat
ONyatAuthor

No. The romance interest is Hinata and Karin.

SiegFredSkill:Is this bl
NJSG
NJSGLv5

Yo ma can't even tell you how bless i feel when i found this novel. I almost never comment but god dammm.... i had to on this one, might be my fav naruto fanfic of all time. Really love this gem man keep up the good work. And trust me every power gem from me is yours.

NJSG
NJSGLv5

Yo ma can't even tell you how bless i feel when i found this novel. I almost never comment but god dammm.... i had to on this one, might be my fav naruto fanfic of all time. Really love this gem man keep up the good work. And trust me every power gem from me is yours.

ONyat
ONyatAuthor

Damn you gonna make me cry

NJSG:Yo ma can't even tell you how bless i feel when i found this novel. I almost never comment but god dammm.... i had to on this one, might be my fav naruto fanfic of all time. Really love this gem man keep up the good work. And trust me every power gem from me is yours.
LESAH
LESAHLv13

Hey author, are u on discord? If u are, pls msg me @BaeVida#7167

ONyat:Damn you gonna make me cry
ONyat
ONyatAuthor

Did it

LESAH:Hey author, are u on discord? If u are, pls msg me @BaeVida#7167
BaeVida
BaeVidaLv15

Thanks

ONyat:Did it
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

from the review u posted, it at least has a bromance

ONyat:No. The romance interest is Hinata and Karin.
Blaze_The_amazing
Blaze_The_amazingLv4

Does Naruto die

Melshan
MelshanLv7

Are they both MC's wives?

ONyat:No. The romance interest is Hinata and Karin.
Athrium
AthriumLv6

am about to start reading, this sounds like a good synopsis, im hoping its good.

LianaLim00
LianaLim00Lv10

Ermm.. I was wondering.. If you're planning to write a story like this in the future.? If not based on Naruto maybe based on Harry Potter.? Nowadays I find it hard to find & enjoy a story about Anti-Hero MC in Naruto & HP .. So imagine the relief I felt as I read & rereading this story of yours.. If only you could make one on HP too.. That'll be great but- no pressure though.. It's just that.. Now that I have to chance to refresh my memory on certain show/movies during this pandemic, I kinda had a darker opinion on my own perspective about the MC's storyline.. Personally, if I'm in Naruto @ HP shoes, I wouldn't do things as the canon storyline did.. I'm very dissatisfied with some plots & characters to be honest.. In a nutshell, I'm very2 relieved that u wrote & most importantly FINISHED this work of yours.. I'm looking forward to your future creation.. [img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins] p.s. I really want that anti-hero HP though 馃槶馃ぃ

ONyat
ONyatAuthor

I actually had such an idea, but currently that's out of my plans, sorry! I'm currently writing an original story, soon it'll start to be published.

LianaLim00:Ermm.. I was wondering.. If you're planning to write a story like this in the future.? If not based on Naruto maybe based on Harry Potter.? Nowadays I find it hard to find & enjoy a story about Anti-Hero MC in Naruto & HP .. So imagine the relief I felt as I read & rereading this story of yours.. If only you could make one on HP too.. That'll be great but- no pressure though.. It's just that.. Now that I have to chance to refresh my memory on certain show/movies during this pandemic, I kinda had a darker opinion on my own perspective about the MC's storyline.. Personally, if I'm in Naruto @ HP shoes, I wouldn't do things as the canon storyline did.. I'm very dissatisfied with some plots & characters to be honest.. In a nutshell, I'm very2 relieved that u wrote & most importantly FINISHED this work of yours.. I'm looking forward to your future creation.. [img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins] p.s. I really want that anti-hero HP though 馃槶馃ぃ
ONyat
ONyatAuthor

btw the MC of my original novel will be anti-hero

LianaLim00:Ermm.. I was wondering.. If you're planning to write a story like this in the future.? If not based on Naruto maybe based on Harry Potter.? Nowadays I find it hard to find & enjoy a story about Anti-Hero MC in Naruto & HP .. So imagine the relief I felt as I read & rereading this story of yours.. If only you could make one on HP too.. That'll be great but- no pressure though.. It's just that.. Now that I have to chance to refresh my memory on certain show/movies during this pandemic, I kinda had a darker opinion on my own perspective about the MC's storyline.. Personally, if I'm in Naruto @ HP shoes, I wouldn't do things as the canon storyline did.. I'm very dissatisfied with some plots & characters to be honest.. In a nutshell, I'm very2 relieved that u wrote & most importantly FINISHED this work of yours.. I'm looking forward to your future creation.. [img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=exp][img=coins] p.s. I really want that anti-hero HP though 馃槶馃ぃ
LianaLim00
LianaLim00Lv10

Oh.. What a shame.. I'm actually looking forward on you writing an anti-hero story on HP next to be honest.. But, I'm pretty confident that you'll be able to work on your magic on your originally planned work.. [img=recommend]

ONyat:I actually had such an idea, but currently that's out of my plans, sorry! I'm currently writing an original story, soon it'll start to be published.
Wesley_Hylry
Wesley_HylryLv14

only two?sad

ONyat:No. The romance interest is Hinata and Karin.
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