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Primordiales
PrimordialesLv34yr
2020-08-05 11:11

This novel does not make sense, it is boring, the MC is a clown, I want to go to the past with limited storage instead of infinity, and there we see his intelligence, when he returns at the age of 5 he begins to show his classmates "Magic" as an idiot showing his inventory. For what? I don't know, it doesn't make sense to show it, but he shows that he knows how to write, read, draw and speak English, all that at 5 years of age, my God it sucks. I am not going to say read it yourself and draw your own conclusion I do not like it, if it were a supernatural world nothing would happen, but it is a modern world it does not make sense that a 5 year old who should only know how to count to 10 can speak English, writing, reading, etc ..... Have a good morning :)

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Xen_120598
4.8
1 Chs

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Fortunate_Soul
Fortunate_SoulLv5

Yup. In the modern world, it's likely that the scientists will capture such a person and experiment on him/her to find the origins of his/her magical powers.

4yr
5
Kitsunc
KitsuncLv3

I knew how to write and read when I four,

4yr
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Xen_120598
Xen_120598Author

I suggest looking at the tags first before reading this book to avoid complains later . Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp

4yr

Charlottes
CharlottesLv13

Oh, damn you're doing slice of life also? Nice the same as me, but not really that slow, writing fantasy sometimes is tiring, I like slice of life and that is the same for fantasy, anyways hope you enjoy writing cause that all it matters. 1+ I'll Support you in this one.

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KoFu_
KoFu_Lv6

SPOILER Chapter 3 and he already revealed his magic power to his entire kindergarten class plus his teacher. And MC as stupid as that is a big no in my books. Sorry. Dropped. If you delete the review I will post it again. Good luck.

4yr
Claire_D_Believer
Claire_D_BelieverLv1

I have rights to vote yoh! Blah blah blah blah blah blah blahblah blah. I enjoyed the book, so I'm rating! 140 140 years in the middle of the states

4yr
Odil
OdilLv14

I'm gonna be honest, couldn't get past chapter 2, grammar is just that horrifying. Not the worst I've seen on this website, but not far. If you're like me, and bad grammar is a turn off for you, then this isn't the novel to read in my humble opinion.

4yr
Klazy_Labbit
Klazy_LabbitLv5

This book is great. I have read some books with similar plot but most of them either make the mc a pervert or some too mature I don't want friends and want only money kind so this one is quite refreshing to read as the mc seems quite reasonable, so far he has messed up a bit here and there but he seems approachable. I love his interactions with his mother and his friends, they seem natural enough and flow nicely. The strongest point of this novel for me is the sheer relatable-ness(a new word made my me) is astounding. I can reminiscence my own childhood when I read this. The mc doesn't seem like any archetype and seems relatable, I would befriend him if I meet him. There are a few small nitpicks of mine though, sometimes the interactions feel a bit forced especially when things concerning his maturity comes into play and he does seem to show his 'intelligence' a bit to quickly but other than that this is a light hearted read which relieves stress and is a good example of its type.

4yr
CHAS
CHASLv3

if i have to rate this, i will definately rate 5 stars. this is leagues apart from ordinary novel. puts smile on my face, great work and 馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憣馃憣馃憣馃憣馃憣

4yr
_Lazy_Bunny_
_Lazy_Bunny_Lv4

I love it. Hopefully you cab focus on writing this story cause its too good to be true. It got the nice blend to it and cuteness overload. Hahaha .

4yr
Goodread
GoodreadLv4

very beautiful, and good, the part where the author wants the reader to think Carla will be taken by his father and filled with evil frog stories want to take the little Carla

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