Fortunate_Soul

Fuinjutsu. Tsunade's hundred strength seal. You lack imagination my friend.

Yun Ming's wife in his previous life. She's a 99 Level Limit Douluo and a 4-word battle armour master.

Not that either. In the books, she was quiet arrogant and conceited. So much so that, in the end, a lot of her allies either deserted or betrayed her. Though she's been white-washed a lot in the show.

Don't use logic in anime.

Even 20% should be more than enough. Roger and his group hasn't reached their prime.

Only 20-30% of his power, I think.

Indeed. I never quite understood these people's obsession with being the 'best assassin ever' in their past lives.

I think the point is that the girl would've been more happy without him.

Hmm... I suppose my criticism wasn't very on point then. Very well. Let me point out to one particular thing then. Early on in the story, MC was very logical but as the story progresses, he's doing things more based on emotions. I'm not sure if you're doing this deliberately as a way of 'character development'. If so, good for you. But I would just point out that an MC who makes decisions based on emotions (especially emotions like anger), is not in control of himself or the situation. And readers don't like reading about someone like that. Second point. MC's entire goal to 'enjoy life' by becoming a hero because 'becoming a hero is harder than becoming a villain' just seems... I don't know... childish, I suppose. Which kinda makes sense as he's still a teenager. But it also points out the fact that he has no concrete goal or desires of his own. I hope I've made myself a bit more clear here. Also, don't feel bad about the criticism, your entire story has been a pretty good read thus far. I'm just pointing out the few parts I didn't like.