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2021-11-25 22:05

The plot is good and I find it enjoyable but I'm already at chapter 300 and something and like get to the point of the story. I understand the need for character development but it's exhausting. I'm already anticipating the drama , the revenge plot,the twist and reveals but it seems not any time soon. Honestly the story feels too slow paced and I'm taking a break.

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_Gavi_Lv15

I won't make this review longer than necessary since most readers already pointed out the PROS and CONS (tbh I'm too busy giggling over the cuteness of the little bun that I honestly see nothing negative) of this novel. Gotta stress out this fact though: The little sweetheart here is really too good to be true. Not because she's one of those little buns in other novels who are over the top geniuses, but simply because she has morals and values that was taught by her mother to which the little bun actually understands, respects and adheres to. I mean honestly, where else can you read something like this? Mostly every chapter, I keep having baby fever because of little Wei Wei 😫❤ The Mommy too is such a strong FL. Not because she knows martial arts or can cultivate hahaha! Moreso because despite being schemed at (I'm still assuming at this point of the story since the past events haven't been brought up yet), her family and close friends abandoning her and even the love of her life back then (lets call him scum ex) refused to trust and help her, even after experiencing the lowest of the low, she had reared a baby BY HERSELF to whom grew up to be one of the loveliest, smartest, most understanding, wittiest (OMG I CAN GO ON AND ON 😅) baby out there! If being a single mom and still able to juggle a successful career doesn't define strong, then I don't know what does. As for the ML/Baby Daddy? Kekekeke nothing much to say other than: President Feng, I approve of your shameless-ness 👏 👏 👏 Readers asks (more like demand 😂) for a mass release chapter after chapter so I'm here to mediate and kindly "suggest" to our dear Author-nim, how about giving us 4 chapters everyday? Hmmm that seems to be too much and we don't want to fry your brains out so how about this; Let's compromise and meet in the middle so instead of 4, we will be satisfied with 2 chapters daily! Who's with me? 🙋‍♀️

ElizaALv3

FL and her lil bun have such a lovely dynamic that you can't ignore. It's so refreshing and even it's full of cliches, the story itself is NOT cliche. (Review as of 59 ch) Cliches 1. FL got pregnant because of a scam, doesn't know who baby daddy is 2. ML/dad is her boss 3. Everyone else sees the resemblance except the main characters involved 4. People in FL's old life are total asses + ML love interest is psycho and entitled 5. ML falls for FL first, FL is dense as a brick when it comes to love. WHY IT'S GOOD 1. mom x daughter moments! The daughter is smart, sassy, and so genuine. She's not an IQ genius like other novels but is an EQ genius. She knows when her mom's putting on a fake smile and lives to protect her mom. 2. FL is strong and rooted in her principles. She doesn't start trouble (not looking for revenge) but is good at giving faceslaps when required. A lot of what she teaches her daughter are good for daily life. 3. ML has a soft spot for daughter and falls in love immediately (without realizing its his). Their interactions are super cute. I expect to see MLs sister/FL best friend to get jealous because she's no longer the favorite haha 4. FL is a pastry chef!! that's right, we're not reading about the entertainment industry. What a breather. 5. ML has total trust in FL and daughter. He doesn't keep FL limited for "protection" but challenges her because he knows her worth, and knows that she can do it. CON/MY PET PEEVE FL's EQ goes out the window when it comes to ML. Her guards are up extremely high and it looks like she's gonna be cowardly for awhile and reject him. Sad. I like reading happy romances where both sides just fall in love.

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