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ElizaALv34yr
2020-08-07 08:41

FL and her lil bun have such a lovely dynamic that you can't ignore. It's so refreshing and even it's full of cliches, the story itself is NOT cliche. (Review as of 59 ch) Cliches 1. FL got pregnant because of a scam, doesn't know who baby daddy is 2. ML/dad is her boss 3. Everyone else sees the resemblance except the main characters involved 4. People in FL's old life are total asses + ML love interest is psycho and entitled 5. ML falls for FL first, FL is dense as a brick when it comes to love. WHY IT'S GOOD 1. mom x daughter moments! The daughter is smart, sassy, and so genuine. She's not an IQ genius like other novels but is an EQ genius. She knows when her mom's putting on a fake smile and lives to protect her mom. 2. FL is strong and rooted in her principles. She doesn't start trouble (not looking for revenge) but is good at giving faceslaps when required. A lot of what she teaches her daughter are good for daily life. 3. ML has a soft spot for daughter and falls in love immediately (without realizing its his). Their interactions are super cute. I expect to see MLs sister/FL best friend to get jealous because she's no longer the favorite haha 4. FL is a pastry chef!! that's right, we're not reading about the entertainment industry. What a breather. 5. ML has total trust in FL and daughter. He doesn't keep FL limited for "protection" but challenges her because he knows her worth, and knows that she can do it. CON/MY PET PEEVE FL's EQ goes out the window when it comes to ML. Her guards are up extremely high and it looks like she's gonna be cowardly for awhile and reject him. Sad. I like reading happy romances where both sides just fall in love.

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Scarlet_Shine
Scarlet_ShineAuthor

Thanks for such a lovely review!!♥️

BlueSpace
BlueSpaceLv4

Ha

Scarlet_Shine:Thanks for such a lovely review!!♥️
Arzella_Baker
Arzella_BakerLv3

interesting book...

lulu777_9305
lulu777_9305Lv13

good morning may i ask how many chapters do you plan to wrote? thank you for your hard word. i read this in hartbeat!have a nice day

lulu777_9305
lulu777_9305Lv13

thank you for your hard work*

Scarlet_Shine
Scarlet_ShineAuthor

Umm I have mentioned this before in the chapters and also to one of the reader in the review section. I am not sure exactly how many chapters will be there but it will be more or less than 700. I won't be keeping too long.😇

lulu777_9305:good morning may i ask how many chapters do you plan to wrote? thank you for your hard word. i read this in hartbeat!have a nice day
Sharon802
Sharon802Lv12

OMG.. This is such a helpful review.. thank you so much.. It sounds really interesting.. I will start reading this novel right now 🤭

Camil
CamilLv4

I just have to say that was an awesome review. Gave me everything I wanted to know and everything I didn't know I wanted to know. 💖💖

Yolanda_Gotier_7107
Yolanda_Gotier_7107Lv14

What a review! This review is witty, candid, and engaging to the point that it made me want to continue to read to the end of the book. I was about to give up and create my own ending, waiting for each of the chapters is exhausting.

Archer_Rime1k5
Archer_Rime1k5Lv1

yeah[img=update] I liked it it wassssssssss really good[img=recommend]

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_Gavi_
_Gavi_Lv15

I won't make this review longer than necessary since most readers already pointed out the PROS and CONS (tbh I'm too busy giggling over the cuteness of the little bun that I honestly see nothing negative) of this novel. Gotta stress out this fact though: The little sweetheart here is really too good to be true. Not because she's one of those little buns in other novels who are over the top geniuses, but simply because she has morals and values that was taught by her mother to which the little bun actually understands, respects and adheres to. I mean honestly, where else can you read something like this? Mostly every chapter, I keep having baby fever because of little Wei Wei 😫❤ The Mommy too is such a strong FL. Not because she knows martial arts or can cultivate hahaha! Moreso because despite being schemed at (I'm still assuming at this point of the story since the past events haven't been brought up yet), her family and close friends abandoning her and even the love of her life back then (lets call him scum ex) refused to trust and help her, even after experiencing the lowest of the low, she had reared a baby BY HERSELF to whom grew up to be one of the loveliest, smartest, most understanding, wittiest (OMG I CAN GO ON AND ON 😅) baby out there! If being a single mom and still able to juggle a successful career doesn't define strong, then I don't know what does. As for the ML/Baby Daddy? Kekekeke nothing much to say other than: President Feng, I approve of your shameless-ness 👏 👏 👏 Readers asks (more like demand 😂) for a mass release chapter after chapter so I'm here to mediate and kindly "suggest" to our dear Author-nim, how about giving us 4 chapters everyday? Hmmm that seems to be too much and we don't want to fry your brains out so how about this; Let's compromise and meet in the middle so instead of 4, we will be satisfied with 2 chapters daily! Who's with me? 🙋‍♀️

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