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MythicalOtaku
MythicalOtakuLv114yr
2020-10-17 12:37

I like the how the first world and start of second world but as soon as he got his first companion I started to get bored because he said he needs them but with his ability he could easily be come a one man army not have to take anyone with him and I find that a lot more interesting then him just picking up people and using his a ability to give them different powers

Apocalypse : Copy Master

WiMaiRi
4.5
183 Chs

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zero_m
zero_mLv1

It killed it for me as well like in LOTR it was great but after he started taking companions it all fell apart like they get stronger things than him while he falls behind i.e. the sword he gave the elf girl and they start expecting him to give them things like Mary with the gold and lighting fruit or her blackmailing him tbh it felt like he became more of a support character they used for power and plot convenience to empower the new non official mc's

2yr
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WiMaiRi
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"......" Writing a review... Another kind of pain... Well.. What should I say... Everything I wanted to say, I already said it up there... Guys... If your planning to write a review... Please! write it responsibly! I mean... don't merely say *BORING* With some dots and then use it as a review... (Like a current one down there...) SAY SOMETHING!!! LET ME UNDERSTAND! Say your real view about the story... Writing Quality Stability of Updates Story Development Character Design World Background That's what the review about... Write according to it... Or sorry.. I'll delete it!

4yr

Heavenly_Rain
Heavenly_RainLv5

This is a good novel but it would do way better if you put it in Fan-faction genre...😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔

4yr
doppleganger
dopplegangerLv5

Full stars. I hope you can compress data as zip file to seal abilities from enemies and will be saved even the enemy died. Files that are not in zip files will gone after death.

4yr
FraulC
FraulCLv14

It started out really well, the power that he have is intriguing. Then after a couple of worlds he's Nerfed. Seriously there ahould be a tag about him being nerfed.

4yr
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

It was a good idea until the author started doing a bunch of unnecessary things. Now? A total waste of time Writing Q = 4 Stability of U = 5. One chapter a day Story D = 3. The plot in other worlds is kinda fine, but the plot 'IRL' is boring asf Character D = 3. Some of the MC decisions make me ask myself if he has brain damage

4yr
SageOfSins
SageOfSinsLv3

Quality: it's a Chinese MTNL translation,... need I say anymore...make my eye look like I had overcharge sharingan. Character: he himself thinks he is smart only to be a stupid naive, goody two shoes with wuxia MC personality. update: the speed of the update is astonishing...(5 star) but I wish writer had just focused on redoing the work and just concentrated on quality rather then quantity. world: the background of world visited are all mixed up for MC's convenience...so leaves a huge gap of plot holes... p.s: I don't think the writer has any idea about some of the worlds and characters as they are out of character plus has their moods all over the place with no control over their emotion. pps: the premise of the story was good but actual work lacks contents and detail and really need grammertical corrections plus with research on the world MC is in and characters he is interacting with.

4yr
Exp_Translator
Exp_TranslatorLv5

well, i'll give brief review. writing quality is good for me, rathwr than several crappy ff in this webnovel. update stability is good. story development,character design, and world background is good. please dont compare this with the original one (planes walker copy) that fanfic was horrible. apocalypse with young master vibe, too many naming with chinese name with domineering personality, mc power development is weak as F U C K. how the hell planes walker' MC still weak when he get infinity stone and already crosses third world??!. this story is recommended by be personally. lol

4yr
MfrnA
MfrnALv13

Awesome 👍😁😊😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Great 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 More chapters please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
Lonely_Drummer
Lonely_DrummerLv2

The plot is nice as well as the characters ,fully supporting the author and is expecting more chapters for the novel .The MC in here is cool also his ability.. Support✌️✌️✌️✌️

4yr
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