Review Detail of EpolApple123 in Destined to be a Black Pen

Here's an honest review for me. I like the story. Though the pacing is slow (maybe for me), it was still a good novel. It was a little messy from the start since you will question the characters' actions and decisions. but as you continue reading it, you will realize that their every action has a reason behind it. just like gian, I saw a comment complaining that he was childish although he already experienced living as an ***** in his first life. but there was a reason behind it. you just have to be observant in every chapter. i hope for the author to continue writing and make this story more interesting. good luck author!