Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Reincarnated: The legendary moon sword

In all honesty, I really like the start up of your work. The moment that the mistress died in the first part was exquisitely well-done! No words can truly describe how happy I am reading such a wonderful chapter/story. It's even better than "I was reincarnated as a sword", for me HAHAHA The only things that I can advise are you need to edit the commas and periods in sentences. There are a few of them out there, so be sure to keep an eye out of them. Another thing worth mentioning is...nah, actually, the story is good. I like it. I like it alot. Keep up the good work, mate!