webnovel
oceansage
oceansageLv44yr
2020-10-19 17:02

Author writing quality is excellent. So, it really was surprised to me when I found how annoyingly stupid the story was constructed. Even after mc stupid decisions, the story was funny in it's first ark( Harry Potter). The second (The mummy) has 5-6 chapter regarding hyena meat. I know it's to flesh out mcs of the movie and it works too, but I can't help but feel frustrated reading those chapters. And we have third ark(resident evil 3) were we have a completely different mc. At this point, I don't even know what was author thinking to tell the story of a completely different person midway of the story. That's the point I stopped reading(ch.78) as all the subsequent chapters are in cailian pov. So, most likely mc of this story didn't appears in this ark. It's sad that although the author writing is good, but changing mc midway isn't wise choice in any story.

Afterlife Travel

AstralWriter
4.3
383 Chs

Liked by 4 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Lord_Hallow
Lord_HallowLv14

Like the story a lot, i just don’t like the POV change at all. Stick with Crynn and forget about the other guy.

4yr

Devil547
Devil547Lv13

The MC is dumb... Anyone who read the books or watched movies can understand how tough the magical world is and he goes into things like he's James bond 🤣 and then blunders and relaxes and does more dumber things..sleeping on the Hogwarts train?! Lol

4yr
yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14

The story is decent but the pov change threw me off. The grammar is good, the story is nice, the character is semi-interesting, but again I'm not a fan of the random pov change and the almost a 100 chapters later your back to where you started just to change back. No warning just right their.

3yr
TriantLord
TriantLordLv11

I like the story. I want to keep reading, but the change in pov is just throwing me off. It's a good book, I just wish the author would stick with a single character. Skipped right over like a whole volume after reading the first chapter of the pov switch. I thought, alright just skip the volumes that aren't the main character. Then got to the newest volume and it keeps bouncing back and forth between characters.

3yr
AstralWriter
AstralWriterAuthor

Shameless review by shameless author : If you'd like a fanfiction with the infinity genre, that's also what I'm looking for but since there is hardly any, I decided to write one myself. I'm a complete novice so according to myself, the story is great (Only because I authored it). Give it a try, give it a read, if you decided that it's not your cup of tea, that's also fine, there's a lot of other great fanfictions to read other than mine. I think I'm gonna stop, thanks.

3yr
WolfantChaos
WolfantChaosLv7

yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv hhgdsgjjjh fsjojhgjjfghjgrj yyyyuuuiimyyvyv

4yr
enryuuuuu3
enryuuuuu3Lv3

trash . n

4yr
paras_rai
paras_raiLv3

The story is really good and entertaining The author now write well, The story is really good and entertaining The author now write well, The story is really good and entertaining The author now write well,

3yr
paras_rai
paras_raiLv3

Author your story are fabulous but can you add a Anime World next plz Author your story are fabulous but can you add a Anime World next plz Author your story are fabulous but can you add a Anime World next plz

3yr
Related Stories

Marvel: Warhammer Simulator

Zaire finds himself thrust into the chaotic universe of American comics, where living a peaceful life seems impossible. Earth is engulfed in endless battles and crises, and even if Zaire manages to avoid them, the looming threat of Thanos collecting the Infinity Stones persists. Unwilling to gamble with his fate, Zaire's luck changes when he acquires a life simulator from Warhammer 40K. Now, with bolt guns, dreadnoughts, and Thunderhawk gunships at his disposal, he's ready to take on the universe. Armed with poison blade tanks and even the potential to wield Emperor-class Titans, Zaire's bravery knows no bounds. Empowered by the psychic strength of the Emperor and divine blessings, Zaire faces every danger with a confident smile, declaring, "The Astartes have agreed to let you run 100 meters first!" ........... If you want? You get to read the next chapters before anyone else! Just go to pateron get chapters in advance: patreon.com/THE_INDRA_

LORD_INDRA_ · Movies
4.8
70 Chs

A Ninja in the Marvel Universe

After a freak accident, Harry finds himself transmigrated into the world of Marvel with a mysterious system. The system grants him unique abilities to navigate and thrive in the dangerous and chaotic Marvel Universe. With the help of the system and his growing understanding of the Marvel Universe, Harry must tread carefully and make difficult choices as he embarks on a journey filled with adventure, danger, and the potential to leave an indelible mark on the world of Marvel. **The system is derived and based on the Naruto Anime which will help Harry in becoming the strongest ninja in the Marvel Universe** **The system does not have and will not have any form of consciousness.** -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This will be an Alternate Universe i.e AU MCU. Well not much is going to change though. Most of the events will occur according to timeline of the original Marvel movies. Only the timeline of the webseries of 'Daredevil, Shang Chi, Jessica Jones and Punisher would change'. The events of these webseries would start earlier then what was shown. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I own nothing except the main character of the book. The Marvel world and it's characters belong to their respective creators. Also the cover page is not mine. If the owner of the cover page wants it to be taken down, then it can be done. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- For 5+ advance chapters visit my patreon. patreon.com/StoryTeller229

Story_Teller_229 · Movies
4.0
72 Chs

Marvel - The primogenitor of the symbiotes

Ryan, a typical college student, could be found anywhere. One day, after attending a lively college party, he fell asleep during the bus ride back home. Upon waking up, he surprisingly found himself in a completely different body. Now, he faces the challenge of understanding his new powers while trying to figure out what his role is in this new world full of fantastical beings. Important Notice: This story will not feature the character Knull. In theory, the protagonist would be Knull himself; furthermore, he has no knowledge of the Marvel Universe, coming from a reality where it does not exist. "Updates Mondays, Wednesdays, Fridays" ----- My works are also posted on the Webnovel and Royalroad websites. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/943130/marvel--the-primogenitor-of-the-symbionts/ https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/78368/marvel-the-primogenitor-of-the-symbionts ----- If you liked the story and want to see more, consider taking a look at my Patreon, are several chapters ahead per week. https://www.patreon.com/Rowen_Kun/membership ----- My discord server for conversations and pictures of the protagonists of my works, as well as possible spoilers of my future stories. https://discord.gg/g7YrnpbTYq

Rowen_Kun · Movies
4.1
145 Chs

Marvel: I'm a Symbiote

Alex Hunt was a smart man. By no means was he a genius, but he stood solidly in the above-average class of society. He thought that when he died, he would at least go with a bang. Sadly for him though, his death was as generic as they came. Struck to death by a truck driven by a drunk driver who wasn’t looking. ‘At least there’s a bang…’ He thought as his head banged on the concrete. He thought that that was it for him, but destiny had other plans. He was reborn. Reborn as a Symbiote in a version of Earth that was definitely not the MCU. And with a system to boot. He didn’t know what he was going to do. But his first priority was to survive in this chaotic world that he’d just found himself in. One that’s far more chaotic than the MCU but similar at the same time. ============================================= Why am I writing this? I wanted to read a good Venom fanfic, couldn’t find it. Hence, I had to do it myself. There will be R-18 and it won’t be the conventional kind. It will be degenerate R-18 if you would call it that. Again… I cannot stress this enough… There’s quite a bit of extreme stuff in this book, so don’t complain in the comments about it. Will all of it be sex? Of course not, far from it actually. I’m trying to write a story with developed characters and a nice plot that I’m very ambitious about. It's not just R-18, there's going to be quite a bit of action too. The R-18 is a bonus. It will be pretty far from the realm of normality though (It’s venom. Of course it’s not normal sex… But the human element will be present.) Tags: [Non-human protagonist] (Surprise!) [Harem] (Again, surprise!) [Evil MC] (Maybe Chaotic Neutral...) [Gore] (Probably, the killing may get a little violent and brutal) And probably a lot more. I’m not sure if I will completely stick to these tags, but that’s the current plan. Might change as the story progresses. Oh, and also— Multiversal collapse. ============================================= I'm open to criticism so lay it on me if you have any genuine problem. Join my discord, you can give me suggestions and communicate with me regularly to get updates. https://discord.gg/c3kCBE32vn If you want to support me check out my Patréon. I post 15 advanced chapters of the book on my Patrèon along with some exclusive R-18 scenes. Check it out! www.patreon.com/addyctive ============================================= Also, none of the art is mine. I got it from Reddit. If the creator sees this and wants credit or wants me to take it down, just let me know. This is purely a work of fan fiction. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the characters.

Addyctive7 · Movies
4.4
289 Chs
Login