Wanted to give this a shot because you don't often see fics about elixir, his ability is dope. Alas I was disappointed. You begin the story with the main character literally torturing someone for amusement. Why would you make the MC so unlikable? I'd imagine you've got a lot of issues writing an MC to be like this.
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Just tell me have you read complete book. Because I don't think you have even passed 25 chapters. And the reason was because at first the book was just a way for me to escape reality by torturing people who i thibk were deserving. After 15 i turned serious because of some readears who liked the book. So my friend my reauest atleast read 25 chaps.
If you know the beginning of the fic is flawed, and you want people to enjoy it, why dont you fix it? You realize more people would stick around for the later chapters of your fiction if the starting chapters weren't flawed.
Well bro i have given my reason about why i will not edit firat 15 chapters. They have an emotional attachment. Those chapters are like a reminder to me.
How ****ed up would you be after the one attachment to the world you have the one person you care about and love is killed by your parents for being a mutant. I personally don't think anyone would be mentally okay after that.
Doesnt change any of what I said
dude you're writing to an audience not to your self....
yes yes he's indeed writing for himself if he liked those 15 chapter then he can kept it as long as he wants if you dont like it then you can just not read this fic
