This is a good story the characters are fleshed out the main character has a life goal and is activelY working towards it not only that But the world makes Sense

holy sh*t that was dark......and i love it, kinda ironic since i work at a hospital and we'd never wanna see these kinds of cases in our "house". Doesnt change anything though, just love to imagine myself venting out on mc's like this. Like them doing something i'd never do( because its not me and thats obviously batshit crazy)

What do we have here??? A ruthless OP MC with good story and dedication. He has business empire and is determined. He has power, money, mind . So, should I pack it. Perfect I found the gem 💎 I was looking for!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story leans far to much on dark and edgy to the point of gratuitous overuse with no real purpose. When the line is blurred and the actions taken to the extreme, it justifies nothing to make the end mean something. He is not Dexter a serial killer with a moral compass to give guidance to his inner monster. he is even far worst than Magneto, a broken Auswitch victim tormented by his past and becomes an ambiguous villain/anti-hero constantly struggling with his guilt and hatred. This protagonist on the other hand is delude psychopathic man child throwing tantrums, making up excuses for his self righteous behavior, he has no real purpose and whatever future he builds will be a worst future yet. And reading this just fuels a masochistic indulgence in violence without any meaning. So good luck with your stories, I will look into other that has actually some value to my daily readings.

Wanted to give this a shot because you don't often see fics about elixir, his ability is dope. Alas I was disappointed. You begin the story with the main character literally torturing someone for amusement. Why would you make the MC so unlikable? I'd imagine you've got a lot of issues writing an MC to be like this.

Ahooyyy!!! What do i find here? hidden gem? Yes...yes...yes..!!! OP MC with good storyflow, but beware for MC is ruthless one. I hope Author will add love interest and little romance story for MC character development. Need diferent POV for his friend, ally, and enemy for detail and story progress, i mean like vampire that MC got, he is part of a covenant right? his job is to provide human and blood for his covenant, so what is his covenant respon to this,? that will be great story to read about scheming, fighting, killing vampire covenant that has goverment support. Anyway thanks for writing this novel!

story not bad ........................................................................................................But you need to seek help, you got issues man.

Think about copying Cypher abilities, Omnilingualism ,is just very broken, he could see DNA sequences as a language and completely understood them, advancing is genetic modification techniches by leaps and bounds ,the rest is story ...

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