Well, first off I wanted to elaborate It's pretty fine read, that feels like a proper light novel with just some minor problems. Like logic behind characters actions really screwed, and because of this author have some need to explain how they come to this. A lot of lucky moments, that you could see from just a glance that it's forced. Now more of personal preference. I don't understand how you created it. It's basically shounen cliches stories with sprinkle of smut and a lot of cringe. Mc? Beta guy with wild demon inside of him. How wild demon in him? As far as Japanese cliche allowed him. Just a guy that doesn't afraid of fighting and peaking out girls. With morales and need of showing off and being a hero? Oooph... How good characters? They do dumb stuff regularly, for the sake of a story. I don't know, not sure. How good lewds? Well, if you close you eyes on a lot of cringe lines of mc, and skip his thoughts. It's very mild, I never understood why Damien wild, when he is quite prude and gentlemanly. In the end, it's a huge disappointment in smut area, and as a proper story. If you read some harem light novels, you already see those characters, situations, and already could predict where and how, main character get his mental growth. The worst problem, you still need to read about mc, when there is better character which is Damien. P. S. Did we return in 2013? Where those things where popular, it's even called new and fresh... Bruh.
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