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NelisPurrrrrsLv24yr
2020-08-07 14:01

The beginning of this story is quite boring. No real development between the family members so they are kind of stale, the protagonist is also stale since we hardly see her express herself around others or her family (she pretty much prefers not interacting with them). She is also constantly being upped in power throughout the story since she is constantly reading books and exploring magic and her newfound power and the author is more in favor of large time skips to make her even more OP while that is not going to make the story any better.

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NelisPurrrrrsLv2

Pretty much dropped this after chapter 5.

CIiff_HangerLv11

Thank you for the only honest review on this book. I will not be reading this then. It seemed to have a decent potential based on the powers but from what you say, its probably lacking in depth. The other reviews are just spam by one person. Besides, time powers in Marvel? What about the time-stone? Will there be some secret technique she discovers where she absorbs the stone for herself? It won't make sense if the time-stone doesn't affect her since it is the strongest force in terms of time-manipulation.

KhiioneAuthor

I would like to state, this review was written before the rewrite, and I do agree with many of their points in what they said from before the rewrite, but I feel as if this version is far better. To answer your question about the time-stone, It will play a rather large role in the over arching plot.

CIiff_Hanger:Thank you for the only honest review on this book. I will not be reading this then. It seemed to have a decent potential based on the powers but from what you say, its probably lacking in depth. The other reviews are just spam by one person. Besides, time powers in Marvel? What about the time-stone? Will there be some secret technique she discovers where she absorbs the stone for herself? It won't make sense if the time-stone doesn't affect her since it is the strongest force in terms of time-manipulation.
BaaSheep123Lv5

Author are you still updating this novel? Would like to read it as it interests me but I don't want to waste my time if this won't grt continued. :)

Khiione:I would like to state, this review was written before the rewrite, and I do agree with many of their points in what they said from before the rewrite, but I feel as if this version is far better. To answer your question about the time-stone, It will play a rather large role in the over arching plot.
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