Review Detail of RionSteiner in Marvel DC Harem
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Title: Marvel the King Same author as Marvel the Immortal Throne and Marvel Strongest Villain MC was able to get skill from questing to killing his enemy, - he has massive harem and sleep every single one of them, - occasionally reference on how chinese culture are great than the other - like how the food was good in how powerful china is even in Marvel world and other. - Mild bashing to other countries that make china nation superior to other especially the japan has a lot of trashing and bashing. - he travels to different series from tv to anime to movie and he sleep with every single main woman in there. - he is Op Author was chinese and you only a reader that someone internationally translating this fic so don't be surprise on how the author make china superior than the other. For others who read this fic mtl or translated some of the arc and scene maybe left bitter taste on your mouth if you're not a chinese. Oh I also read the other fic this author has, I just ignore the part where how his MC always boast how superior China and it culture was. If you manage to ignore that part somewhat you surprise you enjoy it when you love bashing genre here and there.
Marvel DC Harem
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Please do explain to me, how a novel that states harem will be a premise in its very name, is flawed because it goes the harem route? It's in its very fkn premise! Now you can state that it is badly handled, that the build up towards the harem is unrealistic, or that the female characters lack personality. And I'd be behind you on that(if there's logic to back it up). But you're giving this a bad review because of its very base premise? I wonder if the author only kept your review around, to try and paint all his critics as idiots.
I already read this fanfic 90% and its clearly a harem whether you understand my review or not. Its over 1.5k chapters.
Ahtu_Flagg:Please do explain to me, how a novel that states harem will be a premise in its very name, is flawed because it goes the harem route? It's in its very fkn premise! Now you can state that it is badly handled, that the build up towards the harem is unrealistic, or that the female characters lack personality. And I'd be behind you on that(if there's logic to back it up). But you're giving this a bad review because of its very base premise? I wonder if the author only kept your review around, to try and paint all his critics as idiots.
Ahtu_Flagg:Please do explain to me, how a novel that states harem will be a premise in its very name, is flawed because it goes the harem route? It's in its very fkn premise! Now you can state that it is badly handled, that the build up towards the harem is unrealistic, or that the female characters lack personality. And I'd be behind you on that(if there's logic to back it up). But you're giving this a bad review because of its very base premise? I wonder if the author only kept your review around, to try and paint all his critics as idiots.
Your funny, you sure you understand what I write on review section? 1. It was not his fanfic, he only translating it, maybe using some mtl and fixing to become readable. 2. I only write what's to expect and heads up in the future if any reader read this. 3. I recently dislike some chinese fanfic with heavy nationalism and make china superior through other country. I know the author was chinese but my change of perspective that lead to given this 1 star rating. 4. Please read throughly on review section carefully. 5. Its harem, I read this fanfic 90% a year ago with over 1.5k chapters on it.
Ahtu_Flagg:Please do explain to me, how a novel that states harem will be a premise in its very name, is flawed because it goes the harem route? It's in its very fkn premise! Now you can state that it is badly handled, that the build up towards the harem is unrealistic, or that the female characters lack personality. And I'd be behind you on that(if there's logic to back it up). But you're giving this a bad review because of its very base premise? I wonder if the author only kept your review around, to try and paint all his critics as idiots.
Sorry, the site did not allow me to extend it and read all of it. There was no such button the first time around. And now it no longer matters... I read the first 3-4 chapters(started on 4 or 5, dont recall which, don't really care). I'll just past over what I added in on the 4/5th chapter: "/puke. I was considering giving this novel a chance, if it at least tried to adhere to the original characters. In spite of the authors clear desire to act out his Narcissus complex in his SI. But as soon as I read the first paragraph of the next chapter, he dials the ruining of original characters and his Narcissus complex up to 11 - Clearly blinding him to just how shitty his writing is turning. And so I am now convinced he is constantly deleting reviews. Pathetic. "
RionSteiner:Please read throughly my review.
I never said it wasn't a harem. And though I find the novel revolting, my original point still stands. He doesn't claim it to be some specific translation. He gives it a title, and claims it to be just that(meaning he probably just stole it, and gave it a personal translation. Though judging by its base quality... Who cares? It feels like he stole a handful of dirt). And so going by the way he published it, you can't exactly blame a story that says "harem" in the title, setting it as a premise, for being what it claimed it would be(harem). You can on the other hand blame it for being horribly written(which it is), filled with mindless narcissism(which it is), and incredibly bad in its attempts to portray the original characters of the franchise it's copying. So yeah... This novel sucks. But I don't blame it for being what it claimed it would be. Why would I?
RionSteiner:I already read this fanfic 90% and its clearly a harem whether you understand my review or not. Its over 1.5k chapters.
I don't understand what's your problem? Is it because I rate it 1 star? It seems you have a problem with that and base on your first reply on my review. I just giving a heads up on future reader. If 1 star was your problem, told u the reason isn't it, I already this fic so I gave it a 1 star.
Ahtu_Flagg:I never said it wasn't a harem. And though I find the novel revolting, my original point still stands. He doesn't claim it to be some specific translation. He gives it a title, and claims it to be just that(meaning he probably just stole it, and gave it a personal translation. Though judging by its base quality... Who cares? It feels like he stole a handful of dirt). And so going by the way he published it, you can't exactly blame a story that says "harem" in the title, setting it as a premise, for being what it claimed it would be(harem). You can on the other hand blame it for being horribly written(which it is), filled with mindless narcissism(which it is), and incredibly bad in its attempts to portray the original characters of the franchise it's copying. So yeah... This novel sucks. But I don't blame it for being what it claimed it would be. Why would I?
M.C is a selfish jerk, have massive superiority complex, and obviously not comfortable with his sexuality. It's also repeatedly mentioned in this novel how women should always be under men.. basically he just treats them all like sexual objects created for only him... Typical Chinese novel. You'll only like it if you're Chinese.
sooooo.... theres an important problem with translator for translating this novel. although translator change mc's identity from Chinese to British-American, but thats the biggest problem itself.... because the original novel is basically a racism driven plot 1. In original, mc was chinese so he was not welcome by the westerner and it cause a lot trouble to mc. 2. The original mc was an extreme racist. so all of his decision throughout the novel is from a standpoint of being a chinese racist. oh and i will also point out what was ridiculous and disgusting in original novel, because china is always numbawa!! so mc never touch the chinese land like thats a f cking sacred land.. and theres also author for glorifying china, for example.. captain british is inferior to chinese team in this novel, like captain britain has a f cking Stone sword gifted by Merlin with a multiverse power but he cant even make mc stepback when they fight with his full power attack. but when mc was fighting a chinese super hero, that said super hero has a spell formation that can transmit billions of chinese people like son goku and can make a tie with mc in pure physical power. so thats f cking ridiculous.. as for harem? meh.. basically all the female heroine, superheroes and villains are VIRGINS.. and he never had s e x with non-virgins like they are kind of disgusting virus. overall this is a goodnovel if you can stomach mcs racism... and mcs power is the most envious power i ever read for me. he unlock his prain power to 100% when he visited the movie world "Lucy" so all of his mess-up power was integrated into one OP ability and OP phyics.
Paksss:sooooo.... theres an important problem with translator for translating this novel. although translator change mc's identity from Chinese to British-American, but thats the biggest problem itself.... because the original novel is basically a racism driven plot 1. In original, mc was chinese so he was not welcome by the westerner and it cause a lot trouble to mc. 2. The original mc was an extreme racist. so all of his decision throughout the novel is from a standpoint of being a chinese racist. oh and i will also point out what was ridiculous and disgusting in original novel, because china is always numbawa!! so mc never touch the chinese land like thats a f cking sacred land.. and theres also author for glorifying china, for example.. captain british is inferior to chinese team in this novel, like captain britain has a f cking Stone sword gifted by Merlin with a multiverse power but he cant even make mc stepback when they fight with his full power attack. but when mc was fighting a chinese super hero, that said super hero has a spell formation that can transmit billions of chinese people like son goku and can make a tie with mc in pure physical power. so thats f cking ridiculous.. as for harem? meh.. basically all the female heroine, superheroes and villains are VIRGINS.. and he never had s e x with non-virgins like they are kind of disgusting virus. overall this is a goodnovel if you can stomach mcs racism... and mcs power is the most envious power i ever read for me. he unlock his prain power to 100% when he visited the movie world "Lucy" so all of his mess-up power was integrated into one OP ability and OP phyics.
Authir make black widow unconsious , she was scared because thor's planets weapon make she scare and mc f.cks her because she bite his lops when she is unconsious . Mc ra.pe someone who look like a loli because he lose control after rob others skills . Other villains are like chinese young masters . Mc starts speaking with womens who are beautiful about how chinese wonderfull and they start loving him because he is a very handsome chinese person . You can understand what i try writing and there are from only 300 more chapters ... Every beautiful women start loving mc because he is mc \(L o L)/ if they have a boyfriend world became an au version to let mc fu.ck her too because at au version this women who is beautiful is not have a boyfriend The f...k ?
Ahtu_Flagg:Please do explain to me, how a novel that states harem will be a premise in its very name, is flawed because it goes the harem route? It's in its very fkn premise! Now you can state that it is badly handled, that the build up towards the harem is unrealistic, or that the female characters lack personality. And I'd be behind you on that(if there's logic to back it up). But you're giving this a bad review because of its very base premise? I wonder if the author only kept your review around, to try and paint all his critics as idiots.