Review Detail of shinydecapod in Dragon Sorcerer in One Piece

finally a one piece fanfic with out harem!!!! and most importantly an OG story not one of those carbon copy. Story flow is good not the best but by how many fanfic i have read. this one is really unique and and has good build up. power opness of the mc is too much for me. but hey i like Jackie chan adventures. so let that one alide. grammar im not good with that aslong as the sentences are readable and doesn't look and sound weird. its good for me. i know i tried writing and im crap at it. soooo kudos to you Author. again thanks for this chapter. hopefully there is no harem or early love snusnu. but if you really have to go that route. hope you deliver it just right.