This novel was finally picked, so I decided to give it a chance and read it. I now understand why no editor wanted to pick this up. The grammar is horrendous. Whichever group or person translated these 60 trial chapters, please don't use them anymore. The wording is too janky, The dialogue makes it seem like 5 year olds are talking, every other paragraph has a poorly structured run on sentence. I know most of the webnovel community doesn't care much for proper grammar and wording or else vampire system wouldn't have been at the top of the rankings for the past half year, but come on guys; This is unbearable to read.
Jijumjang
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LIKEAs an ex-editor, I have a developed a skill to find 95% of grammatical and writing flaws, so that's something I cant just ignore.
SeaBass:I have developed a skill of being able to read almost anything unless the person makes the words impossible to read. i focus on the characters and plot
Vyte:As an ex-editor, I have a developed a skill to find 95% of grammatical and writing flaws, so that's something I cant just ignore.