Review Detail of wsxdr22 in Only I Am a Necromancer

I can't tell if it's the translation quality or just the dialogue and the general way the author wrote it but there's a disconnect or unrealistic feel to the conversation and reactions of the characters. I don't know if it's just me especially because of all of the reviews but I really can't enjoy this story because of it. Also, the story is kind of generic not that alone makes it bad but combined with the translation or dialogue it is pretty bad.