Review Detail of Kyubikn in Second chance?! [Dropped! For now!]

Welp where do I start...the story begins like any other fanfic...sudden death, meets god, few wishes and baam the story starts. I almost quit it on the first chapter when our MC asked for a shared system like WTF?. But I still pushed myself hoping it would get better as he is technically 18, read loads of novel on his previous life and basically has knowledge of danmachi world...but just when I self hypnotized myself saying it would turn good...but our MC who is pathetically weak(right now) offers a whole freaking village to migrate to his soul world the moment he hears they need to fend off some beasts to stay safe...being naive is fine but being naive and a white Knight in shining armor is contagious. But still I steeled my heart and carried on...but then what I saw next was so cringy that I couldn't unfold my fingers cuz I cringed so hard. He basically goes to meet eina..and the first thing she thinks is that he is seducing her..and just after that he asks her to make an oath( which no person with proper functioning brain would do... specially for a person they just met). And viola our goody MC Spills some more beans about him...and that was when the last straw holding me snapped. And last but not the least is that he is way way way too dependent on his system...Utah Utah Utah...I got sick reading that name on every chapters. Welp if u guys want a goody two shoes, naive and overly dependent MC this fic is for u. All in all...this fic left a bad taste in my mouth (for me atleast). Good luck with your work I guess. Cheers