Review Detail of Keiys in Mommy Villainess
Review detail
You need to read this novel!!! (This review is based on chapters up to the 82nd) Firstly, this is not your typical reincarnation story. The story is full of mysteries that will never fail to hook you. The plot is multi-layered so you won’t be able to guess everything in one go, hence it’s not boring or predictable. I love how author reveal one thing after another in a pace that is neither too slow nor too hasty. So, there is not one chapter that I find boring or unnecessary. This is such a nice thing because sometimes I find stories (even those that I really like) to be dragging or too slow. I can totally feel that the plot is well thought and solid. Secondly, I love how the chapters are quite long. So even if author only updates one chapter daily, but the reading experience is kind of similar to reading 2 chapters daily. So even though the novel has only 82 chapters as of now, but I think it is quite comparable to 150 chapters of most other novels. So far I’ve only encountered 2 or 3 books in webnovel that publish long chapters like this one. So I really really love the author for this. And so far the update seems regular; one chapter daily with extra chapter once in a while. Thirdly, I love the character build in this story. For starter, I so very much in love with both the main couple. The FL was supposedly a villainess in her first life but seems like there is some conspiracies behind the happenings in her previous life. And I love how thoroughly author incorporated the legend of a phoenix in her character; from how she lives a few life with one being better than the previous to her being the heart of phoenix. She is lovely, smart and has a mature beauty; beautiful face with a seductive body. The ML is portrayed as a very good looking man. But because he had lived a very hard life since young, he is quite aloof and quiet. But after meeting the FL, he starts changing and find enjoyment in interacting with her. He is notorious for being the ‘shadow beast’ but personality he is a gentleman through and through. He fits with the saying ‘gentleman in the streets, beast in the sheets’ 😝. I really love how he is with the FL. Their love and passion for each other are to die for and I love every fluffy and steamy moments of them 😆. So, give this a try and you’ll love it!
Mommy Villainess
sola_cola
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Thank you for the review! So far. this is one of the few reviews that made me cry. I'm so touched. Thank you for appreciating the story, the characters, and the pacing. I've always worried about whether the flow of the story is going too fast. This comment puts me at ease. Again, thank you. I mean it. :)
You’re welcome 😊. I’m glad this review makes you feel that way. It’s the least I could do to show my appreciation and support for this novel. And actually, I should be thanking you for writing this amazing story. I think this is comfortably paced. It might seem fast by a glimpse but because of the world and time setting, and most importantly the experiences/memories of FL’s first life, the pace is definitely justifiable. I don’t find it necessary for their progress to be dragged as it is in accordance to the FL’s resolve and ML’s character. I’m sure that most people will like this novel, it’s the matter of whether they’d discover this or not. I’ve stumbled upon this book and added it to my library a few weeks back but only read it just recently. I think maybe you could add something to the synopsis to hook new readers even more? Like maybe hinting them on how this story is full of mysteries and twists (without spoiling the plot of course 😉). Or maybe include some excerpt of an interesting scene into the synopsis (which is many 😆)? Hehe idk but I think the synopsis doesn’t quite reflect the awesomeness of this story. Or maybe you can pin some reviews that you think might be helpful for the novel. I’ve seen some authors do that and I find it very helpful because I would read the reviews first before starting a novel. Hehe I hope this could help and I’m not babbling too much.
sola_cola:Thank you for the review! So far. this is one of the few reviews that made me cry. I'm so touched. Thank you for appreciating the story, the characters, and the pacing. I've always worried about whether the flow of the story is going too fast. This comment puts me at ease. Again, thank you. I mean it. :)
Keiys:You’re welcome 😊. I’m glad this review makes you feel that way. It’s the least I could do to show my appreciation and support for this novel. And actually, I should be thanking you for writing this amazing story. I think this is comfortably paced. It might seem fast by a glimpse but because of the world and time setting, and most importantly the experiences/memories of FL’s first life, the pace is definitely justifiable. I don’t find it necessary for their progress to be dragged as it is in accordance to the FL’s resolve and ML’s character. I’m sure that most people will like this novel, it’s the matter of whether they’d discover this or not. I’ve stumbled upon this book and added it to my library a few weeks back but only read it just recently. I think maybe you could add something to the synopsis to hook new readers even more? Like maybe hinting them on how this story is full of mysteries and twists (without spoiling the plot of course 😉). Or maybe include some excerpt of an interesting scene into the synopsis (which is many 😆)? Hehe idk but I think the synopsis doesn’t quite reflect the awesomeness of this story. Or maybe you can pin some reviews that you think might be helpful for the novel. I’ve seen some authors do that and I find it very helpful because I would read the reviews first before starting a novel. Hehe I hope this could help and I’m not babbling too much.
+ i'll try to figure out how to pin a review. TBH, webnovel still confuses me even if it has already been almost 2 months since i started to write here. i only post the update, read the comments and reply if my wifi is cooperating, then log out. i guess i need to study how to use the app properly to promote my story better 😅
Keiys:You’re welcome 😊. I’m glad this review makes you feel that way. It’s the least I could do to show my appreciation and support for this novel. And actually, I should be thanking you for writing this amazing story. I think this is comfortably paced. It might seem fast by a glimpse but because of the world and time setting, and most importantly the experiences/memories of FL’s first life, the pace is definitely justifiable. I don’t find it necessary for their progress to be dragged as it is in accordance to the FL’s resolve and ML’s character. I’m sure that most people will like this novel, it’s the matter of whether they’d discover this or not. I’ve stumbled upon this book and added it to my library a few weeks back but only read it just recently. I think maybe you could add something to the synopsis to hook new readers even more? Like maybe hinting them on how this story is full of mysteries and twists (without spoiling the plot of course 😉). Or maybe include some excerpt of an interesting scene into the synopsis (which is many 😆)? Hehe idk but I think the synopsis doesn’t quite reflect the awesomeness of this story. Or maybe you can pin some reviews that you think might be helpful for the novel. I’ve seen some authors do that and I find it very helpful because I would read the reviews first before starting a novel. Hehe I hope this could help and I’m not babbling too much.
Oh me too hahah I’ve been here since last year but I still don’t know much about this app; I read, comment, vote, basically only the basic things. I’ve been told that I can add tag to a novel even as reader but up till now I still haven’t figured out how 😅. Anyways, good luck author 💪💪.
sola_cola:+ i'll try to figure out how to pin a review. TBH, webnovel still confuses me even if it has already been almost 2 months since i started to write here. i only post the update, read the comments and reply if my wifi is cooperating, then log out. i guess i need to study how to use the app properly to promote my story better 😅
Sage_George:I wasn't sure I was going to like this novel. But your review tipped it over the edge. So, thank you.
Sage_George:I wasn't sure I was going to like this novel. But your review tipped it over the edge. So, thank you.
I want to read something lite so please tell me in this book there is any kind of misunderstanding between couple or not
sola_cola:Thank you for the review! So far. this is one of the few reviews that made me cry. I'm so touched. Thank you for appreciating the story, the characters, and the pacing. I've always worried about whether the flow of the story is going too fast. This comment puts me at ease. Again, thank you. I mean it. :)
Tejaswi_Dut_Sharma:I want to read something lite so please tell me in this book there is any kind of misunderstanding between couple or not
I think it's been like 2 to 3yrs that I've been on Webnovel and I only just found out last week what the points are used for😂 I didn't know I could buy fast passes and borders for my profile pic💀😭
Keiys:Oh me too hahah I’ve been here since last year but I still don’t know much about this app; I read, comment, vote, basically only the basic things. I’ve been told that I can add tag to a novel even as reader but up till now I still haven’t figured out how 😅. Anyways, good luck author 💪💪.