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Another story where the female lead is really annoying. Lke many stories the FL is portrayed as an overly amazing girl, when it is a far cry. She is kind of sob girl. I know she has a sad past, but usually such past are actually stronger and more resilient than others. I didnt find much depth in the characters. A lot of superficial things like oh she has such a tragic past, oh she is so kind, oh she is so perfect. SUddenly something tragic will always happen to her, then she does something and then bammm Oh wow, she is so great, so queeny. The story deosnt allow readers to form its own imagination and opinion, its itself praising the character is so great. Very dramatic. Felt like watching my mom's serial. It could be definitely amazing if the writing had more depth. The plot has potential but the writing needs a lot of work. Initially the story was indeed quite unbearable the only thing that kept me going is the mystery in the background. But the annoying elements were really repetitive. I know i could be quite harsh and am aware this is author's first work. But i saw a lot of reviews on this book, which i felt were really exaggerations. So, i would like present my opinion.

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My Queen Of Terra

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Author_Hadassah
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Thank you for your feedback. I will do my best to do better as the story goes. First volume is only.the icing. But I will keep your feedback in mind as I continue the story. Thank you for this.

Author_Hadassah
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By the way, how do you suggest must she react then? How do you want to see the FL?

Author_Hadassah
Author_HadassahAuthorAuthor_Hadassah

Dont get me wrong.. Im only asking so I can improve more with this book. Zoe has a long journey that she has to go through to become the Queen of Terra. So I really appreciate your feedback. 😅đŸ˜