Review Detail of Jasonenrick in One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.
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Writing Quality - 2 Stars Story Development - 1 Star Character Design - 1 Star Updating Stability - 3 Star World Background - 2 Star Edit : The thing I hate the most about this Fanfic is the fact that you make him an emotional/ innocent Saiyan that goes around The " holyland ", the most cursed place in the World of One Piece, expecting him to get angry at the WG or the CD because of how they treat them as Humans, fishmen, etc (basically all living things) " slaves " but well....we get this ! Honestly, the Mc is pathetic in his own right . He only mentioned it at the beginning but basically I hoped for more, I mean ....he isn't a Saiyan for nothing . they act with their emotions and don't care If their opponent is stronger then them . If they want to do something then are able to .( DragonBall law!) also, I Think you Made Saiyans way weaker then they orginaly are !
One Piece: The eldest saiyan brother.
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People really like to forget that Goku didn't get world-destroyingly strong until DBZ where he met other Saiyans and started training/fighting with opponents way stronger than him. Before that, he was just considered a super strong human w/ a tail. It's understandable that the MC will not be as strong since he's only working with human-level training methods. And also, he hasn't been through a lot of life-threatening battles so he hasn't really received the benefits of zenkai boosts.
On right, and umm for the saiyans who act even if they are against stronger enemy you're wrong you know... For examples... King vegetal didn't fought back against Cold and Frieza... Or Vegeta himself didn't fought against Beerus until he actually hit bulma. And Broly is a pacifist guy.... Not all Saiyan are daredevil bro... Some will fight only if you hurt their family...
in the anime, I saw that Vegeta was fighting Berrus when he slapped the bulma. He's mad you know, his wife got slapped. Only then did he calm down after losing to Berrus
VastoHeaven:On right, and umm for the saiyans who act even if they are against stronger enemy you're wrong you know... For examples... King vegetal didn't fought back against Cold and Frieza... Or Vegeta himself didn't fought against Beerus until he actually hit bulma. And Broly is a pacifist guy.... Not all Saiyan are daredevil bro... Some will fight only if you hurt their family...
Smoll_FuHua:in the anime, I saw that Vegeta was fighting Berrus when he slapped the bulma. He's mad you know, his wife got slapped. Only then did he calm down after losing to Berrus
The world of one piece is countless times larger than a normal planet. The width of the grand line alone is larger than the circumference of the earth by 3 times. https://wWw.quora.com/How-big-is-the-world-of-One-Piece-Its-clearly-larger-than-Earth-Does-that-have-to-be-right
VastoHeaven:Oh as for Saiyans being weaker than normal... well he would have exploded the planet otherwise... Ah and well I didn't want to focus on his Saiyan self for now but mostly on his relationship and his impact on the world... Well it seems that I didn't did it good enough... sorry...
Hentai_Senchou:The world of one piece is countless times larger than a normal planet. The width of the grand line alone is larger than the circumference of the earth by 3 times. https://wWw.quora.com/How-big-is-the-world-of-One-Piece-Its-clearly-larger-than-Earth-Does-that-have-to-be-right
I mean comparing anyone from one piece to someone that can easily destroy planets and a god of destruction isnt smart lol King vegeta also had an entire planet of people to look out for so i mean lol but thank you for this review! If the mc doesnt act like a saiyan then hes just another Tarble
VastoHeaven:On right, and umm for the saiyans who act even if they are against stronger enemy you're wrong you know... For examples... King vegetal didn't fought back against Cold and Frieza... Or Vegeta himself didn't fought against Beerus until he actually hit bulma. And Broly is a pacifist guy.... Not all Saiyan are daredevil bro... Some will fight only if you hurt their family...
DaoistyQNGiX:I mean comparing anyone from one piece to someone that can easily destroy planets and a god of destruction isnt smart lol King vegeta also had an entire planet of people to look out for so i mean lol but thank you for this review! If the mc doesnt act like a saiyan then hes just another Tarble
Well, that I meant to say was that, there are different type of Saiyans, and not all of them necessarily like to fight, or kill or destroy, it's just that they are naturally the best at it (example: Broly). In universe 8, their Saiyans are even galactic heroes. Anyway, just to say... Every Saiyan are different, they instinctively like to fight of course, it is rooted in their bones but due to their different evolution, they will each have different thought about battle. That's it, I hope that I was somehow understandable...đ
DaoistyQNGiX:I mean comparing anyone from one piece to someone that can easily destroy planets and a god of destruction isnt smart lol King vegeta also had an entire planet of people to look out for so i mean lol but thank you for this review! If the mc doesnt act like a saiyan then hes just another Tarble