Review Detail of Johnbel in Becoming Legend
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Started reading this, haven't gotten that far, about 20 chapters in now, but have given up due to the grammar. There were just too many cases of wrong pronouns, mixed tenses and then weird cases of stating something with the name of the item used, e.g. The masters sword, with the author then right afterwards asking what it was, even though the MC has been using swords his whole life.
Becoming Legend
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Hello, thank you for sharing the thought. English is my second language, so I might have a hard time with grammars. but that doesn't let me stop from writing, so everyday I write to improve my writing. this is my first ever novel, so the writings are a bit going left and right not straight but I tried fixing it by doing revisions if ever I have the time. And also of you could point out what chapter the thing that you have said, I will fix it to improve the story. still, thanks for sharing the thought and have a good day.