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Johnbel

Johnbel

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2018-02-26 JoinedSouth Africa
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel2yr
    Commented

    The number of useless interruptions are a bit insane.

    With Kaisha dropping this kind of bomb without any hesitation, Fen realised that despite how the beginning of this meeting looked like, listening to her could actually give him way more information than he ever expected to receive!
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    Rebirth of the Phoenix God
    Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel2yr
    Commented

    I don't understand, the Mc is constantly lost/not noticing surroundings change, that's not normal.

    Stunned by the beautiful sight of the city basked in the light of the midday's sun, Fen didn't even realise when the vibrant colours of the nearby buildings were replaced by the calm tones of green in one of the local shops.
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    Rebirth of the Phoenix God
    Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    Written in an unknown language*

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Lord of Annihilation
    Fantasy · C0nstance
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    How can it be smooth if it's cracked?

    It was a simple stone altar, made from the same materials as the walls and the floor. The surface of the altar was smooth and flat, with cracks present all over it. Behind the altar, upon the broken stone wall, Olivia finally noticed some carving.
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    Lord of Annihilation
    Fantasy · C0nstance
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    An LED is a few Watts, in modern planes it's only switched off for sleeping basically.

    Interstellar Travel consumed a lot of energy. Although mankind had many breakthroughs in the field of energy sources, reducing such unnecessary consumptions was still helpful.
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    Lord of Annihilation
    Fantasy · C0nstance
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    Should rather be idol than ancestor.

    All creatures running for a while suddenly came to a stop. They were still looking at the castle, seemingly wanting to rush towards it, but still held back. Looking in their eyes, great reverence could be seen. The same reverence one would have, looking at one's ancestor.
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    Lord of Annihilation
    Fantasy · C0nstance
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Posted

    3 chapters in premium, absolutely no clue if the book is any good yet, barely any hint of actual story development. How does the author think he'll get new readers if the story hasn't even started yet?

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    Essence Weaver
    Fantasy · Andrew O'Kelley
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Posted

    Started reading this, haven't gotten that far, about 20 chapters in now, but have given up due to the grammar. There were just too many cases of wrong pronouns, mixed tenses and then weird cases of stating something with the name of the item used, e.g. The masters sword, with the author then right afterwards asking what it was, even though the MC has been using swords his whole life.

    altalt
    Becoming Legend
    Fantasy · Neorealist
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Replied to PrimalKaos

    A 13yo is still a small kid, would be strange if he won against toughened bandits

    Ch 1 Ned
    altalt
    Becoming Legend
    Fantasy · Neorealist
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    Wow, 3 chapters premium and I have no clue as to the quality of the story or pretty much any understanding of the characters or story line. Hope this wasn't a choice by the writer.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: The Path Forward
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    Essence Weaver
    Fantasy · Andrew O'Kelley
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Replied to ImmortalAutarch

    She is going to be a spy among nobility based on previous talent/skill mentionings.

    Smiling, Lucian knew she had already told him. If she truly did not want them to know, she'd have fabricated something. "I see, good luck."
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    Pioneer of Ascension
    Eastern · Chalky
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    You can also only have one eye, just remove it.

    'The highest outsiders of Toubia and Nalduri clashed? That's what changed the colour of the sky and caused that spiritual shock?' His eyes practically glowed imagining it. 'Outsiders… are humans, right? Or something similar? But apparently one had a single eye and another had four wings. Can humans achieve that same level?'
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    Pioneer of Ascension
    Eastern · Chalky
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    That imperial is redundant.

    Imperial Emperor, Alram Toubia sat in his personal study fighting a constant migraine that haunted him for the past few weeks.
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    Pioneer of Ascension
    Eastern · Chalky
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    "I hill you not *hic"

    "Hillunot Village" he muttered.
    altalt
    Pioneer of Ascension
    Eastern · Chalky
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Replied to ImmortalAutarch

    No, it's the inner gate of the city, they're at the north gate of the outer city.

    With a nod, Nine made his way south from where they were, heading to the northern gate of the inner circle, while Ten and Thirteen went east.
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    Pioneer of Ascension
    Eastern · Chalky
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    Pizza is free if you wait more than 30 minutes...

    Three years later.
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    Pioneer of Ascension
    Eastern · Chalky
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    This is a 5 year old, how is he tall enough to ride a horse. I'm still trying to figure out how a 5 year old wields a long sword since it's longer than he's tall.

    Once every child had mounted their horse, the instructor spoke with a sly grin. "Okay, now what you want to do is grip the horse with your legs and give a slight tug on the reins".
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    Pioneer of Ascension
    Eastern · Chalky
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  • Johnbel
    Johnbel3yr
    Commented

    This seems like something you don't want to use in training.

    The Withering technique was the ability to drain the life force of a foe. In its earliest stages, this was limited to draining their stamina, but in the future it would truly live up to its namesake.
    altalt
    Pioneer of Ascension
    Eastern · Chalky
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