Johnbel
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The number of useless interruptions are a bit insane.
I don't understand, the Mc is constantly lost/not noticing surroundings change, that's not normal.
Written in an unknown language*
How can it be smooth if it's cracked?
An LED is a few Watts, in modern planes it's only switched off for sleeping basically.
Should rather be idol than ancestor.
Started reading this, haven't gotten that far, about 20 chapters in now, but have given up due to the grammar. There were just too many cases of wrong pronouns, mixed tenses and then weird cases of stating something with the name of the item used, e.g. The masters sword, with the author then right afterwards asking what it was, even though the MC has been using swords his whole life.
She is going to be a spy among nobility based on previous talent/skill mentionings.
You can also only have one eye, just remove it.
That imperial is redundant.
"I hill you not *hic"
No, it's the inner gate of the city, they're at the north gate of the outer city.
Pizza is free if you wait more than 30 minutes...
This is a 5 year old, how is he tall enough to ride a horse. I'm still trying to figure out how a 5 year old wields a long sword since it's longer than he's tall.
This seems like something you don't want to use in training.