Review Detail of lbaro97 in Life In Another World

I like this story and will continue to read this. Having a main character that actually acts "normal" (as normal as possible in a fantasy setting) makes him seem more human. It's definitely better compared to other novels with this setting. However, the writing style seems a little... weird? I can't really put my finger on it. I think it's the combination of some grammar mistakes, the persistant talk in third person during conversations, the cutesy talk of his little helper, and maybe some other things, that make the story seem a little forced? I guess? Well, of course this is just my perception, but at least for me this makes it harder to read. Still a good story though 👍