Its a book for children. Don't read if you expect a grand plot or lots or details. Its very light novelish. Its an op mc in a new world. Standard stuff
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For some unknown reason, I do agree. I've been avoiding the description like a plague, that subconsciously I've made multiple blunders out of it. Thank you for your honest review and the time you gave for reading my book! I appreciate it. Now that I've seen my mistake, It's my job to fix it. Thank you very much.
Yes that is the description that I was looking not a bad novel to begginers and children. But that's all and I would rest a half star for the most obvious point => MC doesn't have any resentment for the god that forced him to live in a new much more cruel world. it would be much better if he just died before transmigration otherwise it doesn't make any sense
Only after I read your comment, all this time, I've been using transmigration rather than Transported-into-Another World. Plus the resentment, hm, I'll think about it. I mean at the moment of confusion; he doesn't have time to resent the voice who gave him the power, I would probably add some resentment input when I revise my entire chapters. Thank you for reading my book! Yup, adding some, make more sense like he was searching for someone to blame.
lookyfess:Yes that is the description that I was looking not a bad novel to begginers and children. But that's all and I would rest a half star for the most obvious point => MC doesn't have any resentment for the god that forced him to live in a new much more cruel world. it would be much better if he just died before transmigration otherwise it doesn't make any sense
