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Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzAuthor4yr
2020-08-05 20:24

Dear readers, I thank you for giving my book a time to read. I will only leave this review so that you guys can comment the question you have to my novel and suggestion you have in mind. Have a great day! 😁✌️❤️ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

Life In Another World

Black_Rabbit_Oz
4.7
59 Chs

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Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzAuthor

For the time of being, there's no romance yet. Truthfully, I'm still debating which should I choose, but the percentage of non-harem inside my head is 60%

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4yr
Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzAuthor

Yup, there would be a time MC needed to resolve himself and be merciless, but as of the moment, he still far off to that.

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4yr
Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzAuthor

Currently, MC party member is 4 females 2 males including the MC and nope. In fact, even side character has a love interest too, It may sound ambitious for me, but I want to make it equal as possible. But their development would be a long-term plan in the future.

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4yr
Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzAuthor

Atm all humans, I'll add one it won't be an isekai without a beast companion

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4yr
RageKittenOP
RageKittenOPLv14

Is his main weapon trully the bow, bc it is the only reason i wanna read this

4yr
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Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzAuthor

Yup[img=recommend]

RageKittenOP:Is his main weapon trully the bow, bc it is the only reason i wanna read this
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Hunting4food
Hunting4foodLv13

what's the normal release schedule? or is it just when you finish one you release it?

4yr
Black_Rabbit_Oz
Black_Rabbit_OzAuthor

Sorry for the unstable update, I'm currently revising my previews chapters. It is revising, meaning I have to reconstruct everything. Well, not all of them, mostly just to enhance my chapter further, and to justify the words better so that I won't hear any more qualms near in the future 'hopefully' and I still have to consider my daily life activity too, so my time for editing was mostly eating the time that I could give for writing a new chapter. But if I edited/revise a chapter, may not able to write a new one. However, if I keep writing a chapter, whilst not minding the old ones that I should fix, would only be buried and who knows I might make another mistake near in the future, so it is better for me to fix it, so I could focus much better in the long run of my writing.

Hunting4food:what's the normal release schedule? or is it just when you finish one you release it?
4yr
Hunting4food
Hunting4foodLv13

that's fine I didn't mean to pressure or anything I'm more than happy to wait for a chapter I was just wondering if there was one it's not a big deal if there isn't I'm enjoying the story so far and look forward to more 😁

Black_Rabbit_Oz:Sorry for the unstable update, I'm currently revising my previews chapters. It is revising, meaning I have to reconstruct everything. Well, not all of them, mostly just to enhance my chapter further, and to justify the words better so that I won't hear any more qualms near in the future 'hopefully' and I still have to consider my daily life activity too, so my time for editing was mostly eating the time that I could give for writing a new chapter. But if I edited/revise a chapter, may not able to write a new one. However, if I keep writing a chapter, whilst not minding the old ones that I should fix, would only be buried and who knows I might make another mistake near in the future, so it is better for me to fix it, so I could focus much better in the long run of my writing.
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Connor_Sheehan
Connor_SheehanLv15

Will u not be posting anymore chapters?

4yr
llama_gaming_99
llama_gaming_99Lv14

did you drop it

3yr
Roberto_Botello
Roberto_BotelloLv15

did the guy discontinued the story ?

2yr
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Perverted_Old_Man
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The reason why I gave 5 Star rating, perhaps because, I encountered way lot of 2nd and 3rd rate Isekaai Web Novel. This Novel Isn't bad, I could say It has potential. The plot progress at a decent pace. The main character is not the same old generic MC from a regular Isekai trope. He is not an Otaku, Wooh! Yep, he is not one. MC is your regular senior high school student who is about to take a college exam. But fate brings him way a lot more. His characterization inside the story fitted the description of a "normal person". Which is pretty much refreshing. I'll tell you this. I've read way lot of Isekai trope with wanna-be 'Normal Person' MC. Only in this novel, I saw a reaction of a person fitted to be "normal." Unlike any of those, I've read thus far. The MC here is way more much better than those guys. Well, I can't judge this novel as a whole given the few numbers of the chapter, nevertheless, It has potential. Congratulation author for doing a Good Job. I hope you can keep it up. 👍

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Richard_Xeng
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So I’m currently 40 chapters into the story. I initially started this webnovel because I saw it under the “Potential Starters” section and tapped on it on accident. Quick notes on rating Writing Quality: 4/5 on writing quality, the only reason i put this is because there are some awkward sentences. However this is near the first 10 chapters and it doesn’t really affect the readability of the novel. Stability of Updating: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 Do not sleep on the potential of this novel so far. The intro is a bit slow and generic, but once MC gets isekai(ed) the story dramatically picks up. I would say the pacing of the novel is excellent. However powerscaling might seem like an issue. Idk yet, not that far in. Character Design: 5/5 I love the MC. He’s not cocky, he’s not crazy, he’s not stupid, and he’s very human. I’ve enjoyed every character that’s been introduced so far, there’s not a bad character yet. World Background: 5/5 Za Warudo is still building. The environment created by the characters and the fantasy genre in general, helps fill the holes. I would definitely recommend reading this novel. Even if this story ends incomplete at chapter 40, I would say that it was better than some isekai anime adaptions. I’m looking at you “Smart Phone” and “Death March”. I’m looking at you.

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Old_Bones
Old_BonesLv3

If the other is a free review, mine is a real one. Well, It is might be early for me to judge the novel as a whole with only a few chapters. Nevertheless, The Isekai trope isn’t your common trope. MC - Is a Normal Senior Highschool boy. Not an Otaku or a NEET or an Old man. The way he was transported is a common way in any Isekai WN, but at least he wasn’t a type of MC who will just accept everything like ”Oh I was transported Into another world hewlp.” He wasn’t like that. Because of his background as a normal person. His reaction is fitted for his characterization. Now for the plot. The story development, Is not fast but isn’t slow either. You can say, It is a normal pace story. The Grammar wasn’t that bad, there is no big grammatical error, I haven’t encountered one yet. Overall, Good read! Go give it a try. -Bone to the world Is here!

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Jami
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After reading this web novel for a week. This is my honest review, for the reason why I gave it 5 star rating, because I can feel the time and effort that the authors gave on this book. from time to time , I could see the few grammatical errors has been fixed. Some of them were typos but nonetheless, the author is fixing it. Plot - Transmigration MC - Regular Senior High school student. Pace - Normal Stability - Everyday Quick Synopsis. A regular High school boy named Kirohoshi, was transported to the World of Sword and Magic. Facing the unfamiliar world without knowing what awaits from the future, Charging bravely as he overcomes the challenges in this new life. Standing upright, overcoming the hurdle from the Another world!

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LGND
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I will give you five stars for the author name pandora Hearts is one of my favorites . Especially Oz. I hope this novel is good ,thank you ❤️

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Daoist814941
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