Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in Avatar With A System Dropped (Up to Adopt)
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If You like reading about the Mc just following the main cast around and is only there to help them and has no goal at all, then read this. MC Soul purpose in his life is to travel with the Avatar. Train the Avatar. Help the Avatar during his journey it’s so lame. This is why Avatar stories are so bad because 90% of them is just the main character following Aang around. Nothing special about main character at all. He has no special goals except helping the avatar. He has a system, but his goal is to get stronger so he can HELP THE AVATAR. When he gets new bending abilities his first thought is “great, now I can help Aang and train him with these!” Like how lame is that. WQ 3 stars- The dialogue is bland and it’s just not interesting to read. Author doesn’t even use quotation marks so if you are bothered by that then i don’t know what to tell you Updates 4 stars— it just started so I don’t know SD 2 stars— mc gets system, reborn by random god but he doesn’t seem to have ANY previous life memories except vague Avatar story memories he got from ROB CD 2 stars- like I said, mc not even his own person. Train avatar help avatar. he lives for the avatar like he might as well kneel in front of him and kiss his feet. mC MIGHT be a blabbermouth. We’ll see if he tells the gang his secrets in the future but he did tell this random stranger that he received a dream to help AVATAR. Who does that? WORLD background 4 stars - only because it’s Avatar world
Avatar With A System Dropped (Up to Adopt)
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50ShadesOfAss:I was mistaken. This should be 2 stars because the updates are slow
Thanks for assuming the entire story bro. I haven't even left the South pole yet, and you assume he's just there to aid Aang on his journey as a side character. If you would like to know, I had planned on having Soren travel with Aang, not bend to him whim, and as a soul that has no memory of anything but future plot of Avatar, don't you think its best to stay close to the only thing you know. I had planned for Soren to overtake Aang's role as MC because Aang obviously didn't want it, and Soren only planned to teach Aang to have a powerful allies, as Soren can already learn all 4 elements finding the Lion Turtles. I hate when people review novels that only have a few chapters, and then they start to assume its trash because it looks like it will play out a specific way
50ShadesOfAss:I was mistaken. This should be 2 stars because the updates are slow
southgamez:Thanks for assuming the entire story bro. I haven't even left the South pole yet, and you assume he's just there to aid Aang on his journey as a side character. If you would like to know, I had planned on having Soren travel with Aang, not bend to him whim, and as a soul that has no memory of anything but future plot of Avatar, don't you think its best to stay close to the only thing you know. I had planned for Soren to overtake Aang's role as MC because Aang obviously didn't want it, and Soren only planned to teach Aang to have a powerful allies, as Soren can already learn all 4 elements finding the Lion Turtles. I hate when people review novels that only have a few chapters, and then they start to assume its trash because it looks like it will play out a specific way
Honestly I am not a big fan of stories where the MC only has memories that are relevant. It feels like a Cop out, since the author just doesn’t want to deal with old memories.
southgamez:Thanks for assuming the entire story bro. I haven't even left the South pole yet, and you assume he's just there to aid Aang on his journey as a side character. If you would like to know, I had planned on having Soren travel with Aang, not bend to him whim, and as a soul that has no memory of anything but future plot of Avatar, don't you think its best to stay close to the only thing you know. I had planned for Soren to overtake Aang's role as MC because Aang obviously didn't want it, and Soren only planned to teach Aang to have a powerful allies, as Soren can already learn all 4 elements finding the Lion Turtles. I hate when people review novels that only have a few chapters, and then they start to assume its trash because it looks like it will play out a specific way
He will travel same path, but not have the memory of how that situation was solved, and in the end either come up with his own solution, or it will play out how it did in cannon
Zerak:Honestly I am not a big fan of stories where the MC only has memories that are relevant. It feels like a Cop out, since the author just doesn’t want to deal with old memories.
southgamez:He will travel same path, but not have the memory of how that situation was solved, and in the end either come up with his own solution, or it will play out how it did in cannon
southgamez:Thanks for assuming the entire story bro. I haven't even left the South pole yet, and you assume he's just there to aid Aang on his journey as a side character. If you would like to know, I had planned on having Soren travel with Aang, not bend to him whim, and as a soul that has no memory of anything but future plot of Avatar, don't you think its best to stay close to the only thing you know. I had planned for Soren to overtake Aang's role as MC because Aang obviously didn't want it, and Soren only planned to teach Aang to have a powerful allies, as Soren can already learn all 4 elements finding the Lion Turtles. I hate when people review novels that only have a few chapters, and then they start to assume its trash because it looks like it will play out a specific way
