Review Detail of Giant_Sloth in Multidimensional Traveler.

Item: Multidimensional Traveler.
Rating: 3

Review detail

Giant_SlothAuthor3yrGiant_Sloth

Can't give myself more than this. Since i will make many problems. My english isn't the best one. I don't even know when i will upload. Well i will have to see

Multidimensional Traveler.

Giant_Sloth

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WallkerLv4Wallker

Authors shouldn't rate themselves at all, just leave it to others.

3yr

RoosterbeeLv5Roosterbee

If you want to better your writing, you could try to use „I“ sparesly. You aren’t forced to use „I“ in every sentence just because you write in the first person perspective. It’s more comfortable to read that way imo.

3yr