Review Detail of Terminatordelamor in Monstergirl Rancher (Currently undergoing Rewrite)
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First i want to say that i really love the story BUUUUUUUUUUUUT, there is a huge lack of Monster girls, everything is slow and the MC is decent but too passive, things happen to him but he don't achieve anything. He behaves like a pushover and look like a useless person with no determination. (currently in the holy chap 69) I mean he discovered that he can handle the magic from beast, that he have the qualifications to became a breeder,he possesses books that can give him knowledge to became one, a GODDESS tells him to go to that way, what other f***** help do he want to start reading all this books and come up with a business plan ? (with slutty monster girls of cours:) Even a merchant want to work with him, but he is hesitant, WHY ? all the armor plot make him the chosen one, but he is just thinking about selling fruits and what his milf friend would think about that. We all know that the plot armor will make him succeed somehow, but the obvious choice is to abandon the land, start a new farm and use the 6 month time to find a way to take Ceris with him (but with luck and determination he save his milf's famr). 600k is too much and he don't use his time wisely enougth to earn them. He have no real plan (detailled enought) to save the farm and thinks that he will not be able to save the farm, but he don't have a plan B , i don't understand the author logic, i mean the mc don't look stupid so why is he acting like a stupid person ? I'll come back in some chap i hope the mc will become smarter or stronger, or just more decent. Thanks for your work author and sorry for my bad english. PS: WE WANT MORE MONSTER GIRLS ! MORE MAGIC ! MORE SEEEEEGS ! and fights if it's possible... pls
Monstergirl Rancher (Currently undergoing Rewrite)
Lasarus
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Yeah, I'll be making Noah less of a wuss really soon, so you can expect that to be fixed up. It's also one of the things I plan to tweak on in any future rewrite/reworks. And with him having the merchantthe monsters will also be bumping up in number. Fights... I'm not sure how that's going to work. I haven't really considered this a particulalry 'action' filled story, but there's likely to be something... eventually... once he gets some monstergirl guards.
Thank you for considering my humble review, and it's your book so if you don't want to put a complex fight system, no one have nothing to say about that, as long as you enjoy writing it ;) , certainly with the war context, the danger from bandit, bad adventurers, beast and demons, his farm (and girls hehehe) need a kind of defense, but i think you already have ideas of how things are going to be (pls don't spoil me :-) it's cool to have an author that don't go wild when you point something in a review.
Lasarus:Yeah, I'll be making Noah less of a wuss really soon, so you can expect that to be fixed up. It's also one of the things I plan to tweak on in any future rewrite/reworks. And with him having the merchantthe monsters will also be bumping up in number. Fights... I'm not sure how that's going to work. I haven't really considered this a particulalry 'action' filled story, but there's likely to be something... eventually... once he gets some monstergirl guards.